the true story; Little Red Riding Hood

[dragon_hawk]

They always tell you the story of how i was helpless, and hopeless. How my grandmother was sick and i needed to bring her the food

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[kashaar]

wow. all i can think of to say. wow. that made me cry.

[dragon_hawk]

did it actually?
thank you. I would have cried reading it, had i not wrote it. As it is, i feel very numb whenever i read it. you know, almost separate from my body.
i think i stop breathing when he dies.

That is an example of what happens to me at 2:00 in the morning.

[lusee]

No, Bobbi, no!

[I finally read it.]

[dragon_hawk]

yay, good job. did you cry too?
:P

Is this what you're supposed to be doing??

[lusee]

I misted up a little. But that was all.

Re: Is this what you're supposed to be doing??

[dragon_hawk]

heh, very good.
now i should print it for rachel, eh?

Hum

[tizmee]

What goes on in your little/great mind? This is told like you were there...were you there and here I though you stayed home that night. yaha right you do what your told.
The story is too real - It leaves me feeling desprate - it is really well writen....
keep it up kiddo....
your good.
:o)

Re: Hum

[dragon_hawk]

i was there, what chu talking about?

[drummerboy_r2]

that makes me cry... actually. i feel bad, feel pain from this, even though it was from a year ago. excuse me as i cry.

[queen_lily_rose]

OH MY GODS! That Is Stunningly Beautiful! I Am Blown Away! You Are Very Talented!

[dragon_hawk]

thank you very much! it was my version of a 'princess and her dragon'... you know, where the dragon isnt as bad as everyone seems to have thought? in this case its the wolf. :)

[queen_lily_rose]

:o)