SG1 Writing exercise: Fighting Instincts

[dragojustine]

Fighting Instincts
Jack/Daniel first time
PG-13, 1250 words
AN: Writing exercise. Don't ask me what they were fighting about; I haven't a clue, but the exact argument doesn't seem important.

Comments

[starglyph]

I love Daniel's amazement that he connected with that punch.

But Daniel had never met a boundary he was willing to accept

Yeah, and this. This is Daniel.

[dragojustine]

Yeah, the poor man was just gobsmacked by that. I'm glad it all worked for you.

[advection]

The shocks from that were white-hot, and Jack moaned a little before he could suppress it. Daniel dragged their lips together, all pressure and the slight drag and rub of chapped skin and the first hint of the wet-heat of his saliva on Jack's lower lip. He didn't even try to press Jack's lips apart. Jack's entire world, the whole of his physical awareness, pulled in to that single point, that intensity of sensation and aching want. / Daniel pulled back then, and looked at him. "Not a good idea," Jack ground out, with the uneasy feeling that he was saying his line, hitting exactly the cue Daniel had given him.

Totally love that whole section.

[dragojustine]

Yaay, thank you!

[dragojustine]

And, God, but I love hands on the backs of necks. :-)

I've done that, like, four times now *shivers* Man, but fanfic can be awfully revealing about the author. I'm glad that's all triggery for somebody else as well.

[jenlev]

I love Daniel's astonishment. And the way their communication shifts from verbal to instinct to recognition.

[dragojustine]

I'm so glad you liked- thank you!

[jenlev]

:)

[dragojustine]

*dances* Thank you so much!