SG1 Ficlet: Problem Solving

Aug 22, 2008 23:09

Problem Solving
SG1 Jack/Daniel first time, 1800 words, PG-13
Small Victories (4x01) tag
AN: Really not sure about this one, but I wrote this comment and the damn thing wouldn't leave me alone. This is the first J/D first-time I've written, and... I don't know.

Jack had said, 'Davis, give the order,' and Paul had turned to look at him, and waited. And it didn’t make sense. )

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sidlj August 23 2008, 04:29:25 UTC
I love Daniel in puzzle-solving mode. And that ending...

*flails from the guh-ness*

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dragojustine August 23 2008, 13:14:16 UTC
Yaay! *g* Thanks

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writinginct August 23 2008, 04:50:37 UTC
oh Oh OH - that was awesome!! I adore Paul Davis and this was a fantastic way to bring him into a fic. And I can practically see all the gears and wheels spinning in Daniel's head as he puts everything together.

And can you just picture Paul staring at his shut cell phone after calling Jack with the heads up and saying to himself, "I need a drink." lol...

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dragojustine August 23 2008, 13:14:59 UTC
And can you just picture Paul staring at his shut cell phone after calling Jack with the heads up

Heh. That must have been a hard phone call for him. Poor man. *pets him*

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dragojustine August 23 2008, 13:15:17 UTC
I am so glad!

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green_grrl August 23 2008, 06:57:41 UTC
Oh, GUH! Yes, that is Daniel--just bulling through when he has a question niggling at his intellect.

That makes me a little bitchy. It’s kind of a fundamental personality thing.

Heh!

And suddenly realizing he's stumbled upon military guys on the down low, following that trail back to Jack ♥ Daniel ... and giving himself over to it. Again, GUH!

That scene is one of my essential J/D moments, too, and this is a wonderful reconstruction of it.

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dragojustine August 23 2008, 13:16:44 UTC
Yes! Once he realizes that he doesn't understand, how could he possibly let go?

Daniel *loves*

Thank you!

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dragojustine August 23 2008, 13:17:02 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad. Thank you!

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lavenderlocks August 24 2008, 00:11:02 UTC
Yes, yeah - me too; that last little bit - fabulous!

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