Comments | dragojustine: Kings fic: The readiness is all

dragojustine

Kings fic: The readiness is all

Mar 22, 2009 23:33

So I was going to get all these, or at least the first four, written and posted before the second episode Jossed me all to hell... but then medical issues intervened and I didn't. So, the great conundrum of fanfic: Finish the pre-Jossed fic or not? All of which is to say, no spoilers for anything but the pilot, and I think I'll finish the rest of ( Read more... )

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bdblack March 23 2009, 05:19:13 UTC

>>he wants David to say it's not your story either....
>>"It's not a story"

I could picture Jack's dumbfounded stare after that.

>>"Kissing the king's daughter makes you a king," Jack says. "The king's son, not so much."

LOL! Poor Silas is going to have a funny anneurism when he walks out onto the lawn to see this

pairatime March 23 2009, 05:46:13 UTC

I have to second that, I would love it see that happen

dragojustine March 25 2009, 03:50:37 UTC

*g* It would be entertaining, for sure. Thank you!

electrumqueen March 23 2009, 05:21:20 UTC

this is gorgeous. i have chills up my spine.
tysm for writing this <3

dragojustine March 25 2009, 03:51:10 UTC

I am so glad! Thank you (the whole pilot gives me chills up my spine- two hours of chills! I'm so glad I could pass it on)

green_grrl March 23 2009, 05:41:50 UTC

Oh, that is wow ... yeah. It feels so real for them.

dragojustine March 25 2009, 03:51:26 UTC

Thank you so much- I'm glad it worked.

sidlj March 23 2009, 12:26:51 UTC

Mmm, no wonder Jack would fall in love with the man who lifts that oppressive weight of expectation from him. And of course it doesn't hurt that David is golden in the sun and beautiful in his sense of wonder.

By all means keep going with these! They're lovely - and it's the nature of a Five Things/Ways/Times that canon is superfluous.

dragojustine March 25 2009, 03:52:46 UTC

>David is golden in the sun and beautiful in his sense of wonder

Yes. I think that as he grows, it will be hard not to be in awe of him- and Jack is in a position to feel that awe and also see the man behind it, if he looks. It would be hard not to fall in love, I think, no matter his personal resentment.

Eta: right, also (you distracted me with your gorgeous phrasing)- Thank you!

saavikam77 March 23 2009, 13:37:16 UTC

Fantastic! I just love how David turns the tables in the end, and how the weight seemed to be lifted from Jack's shoulders.

dragojustine March 25 2009, 03:53:42 UTC

I'm so glad you liked!