A Strange Little Desert Town - Chapter 12 (4/5)

[dragancaor]

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[bondchick_nett]

AAAAAAAAAAUGH! I know you warned me, but whoas sad chapter is sad. ;_;

I do ADORE all your touches, the running mascara, the rain... Oh man and I SO feel for Jacinta.

I CANNOT believe I never realised how like Nervous Ash really is. It never occured to me that she looked all that similar to her brother, father, grandfather until that first profile-esque shot of her here and then I was shocked!

[bloodflesh]

Want a real mind trip? Check out how much Cory and Nervous look alike

[bloodflesh]

Poor Daniel. Nobody should have to go through that, but at least he had Ash there and damn you and your writing! Making it seem like they are real people!!

[teffielynne]

* surreptitiously wipes tears away*

Excellent writing!

[simsforaranya]

*sobs* Oh Daniel, oh Bella. *sobs more*