FIC: Newts (NC-17)

Apr 01, 2016 19:56

Title: Newts
Author: astolat
Prompt: #1
Summary: "I’m twenty-eight!" Harry said. "I’ve been an Auror for ten years! You want me to go back to Hogwarts now?"
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): CNTW but no warnings as far as I can tell.
Word Count: 13,760
Author's Notes: With many thanks to L & C for beta!

( Newts )

type: fic, fic length: medium, era: post-hogwarts, genre: adventure/action, [admin] fest-2016, genre: humour, rating: nc-17, author: astolat

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akira_tm April 2 2016, 00:56:22 UTC
To read this fic the first time in the morning... I'm really happy. This is really brilliant ♥

[Spoiler (click to open)]
I giggled and laughed in the first half... And there's so much feel in the next that I actually cried a bit T_T
Especially when Harry saw dozens closed shop and his conversation with Slughorn T_T

“I’m going to murder him,” Harry said calmly.
and :
Ron stuck his head through the Floo. “I’ll help you hide the body.”
and then :
“If I have to spend more time with him, he won’t have to justify anything!” Harry said. “He’ll be strangled, and I’ll be in Azkaban. And I won’t even be able to prove he drove me to it.
That made me laughed out loud xD.

The smut scene wasn't even that explicit but MY GOD, that was really hot *Q*

“I want you very sore,” he hissed into Harry’s ear. “I want you limping. I want to take you so thoroughly everyone’s going to know you’re bending over for me.”
hngghhh

“Hermione’s going to kill me,” Harry said glumly the next morning.

“Millicent is going to kill me,” Draco said. “And she’s actually got assassins.”
... )

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cloelockless2 April 2 2016, 09:07:19 UTC
Hahaha, this scene was priceless:
“I think it’s cute, actually,” Luna said, sipping her tea. They all stared at her. She blinked back. “He’s still got such a crush on you after all this time.”

Nobody said anything for a long moment.

“Um,” Harry said. “What?”

“Well, it’s really obvious, isn’t it, when you look back,” Luna said. “He never believed any of it. Voldemort, I mean. He just wanted to make you notice him. He was so unhappy when he really had to join the Death Eaters.”

They all sat in total silence for another ten minutes as years of nonstop tormenting and harassment marched through all their heads, suddenly turned upside down.

And I also loved the "Shut up, yes we are!"

It was interesting to see Harry's realization in Diagon Alley and all the consequences of ther oblivious politics were a bit distressing.

^o^

(andthesexofcourse)

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anonymous April 2 2016, 14:12:24 UTC
I just really loved this whole story <3 I smiled the entire time I read it! Great characterizations of everyone and there were just some really sweet moments:)

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kerrilee75 April 2 2016, 14:58:15 UTC
I really enjoyed this, MA! The politics were very interesting and handled very well. It's always fascinating to imagine how the Wizarding world works after the war. And holy hell. The sex scenes were amazing. I'm all about slow build and pining, but in this case it totally works with Harry seducing Prof Malfoy. The scene LQ quoted above was one of the hottest scenes I've read in forever! I needed a moment after that. Smoking hot!!

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leontinabowie April 2 2016, 22:44:07 UTC
I really enjoyed this story :)

As I said on Ao3, I really liked the after-effects of the war for the Slytherins, and how Harry never really saw how it was until he actually saw it.

The sex was super hot, and I loved how Harry didn't really mean to actually seduce Draco but just went for it. McGonagall's reaction made me laugh though.

Great work ♥

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