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FIC: Carnal Desires (R)

Apr 18, 2015 22:41

Title: Carnal Desires
Author: create_serenity
Prompt: # 125
Summary: It was typical of Draco’s life that he should get everything he ever wanted, whilst at the same time getting nothing he ever wanted.
Rating: R - very smutty
Warning(s): None
Word Count: 5566
Author's Notes: Thank you to my beta avrildulac for all her work on this story. Thank you to lomonaaeren for the prompt as ( Read more... )

type: fic, kink: sex toys, fic length: medium, rating: r, [admin] fest-2015, author: create_serenity

Comments 10

leontinabowie April 19 2015, 11:35:44 UTC

This was a great story, with a really interesting idea. I like that you left the ending open - it fitted the theme of the story. Of course I like to think that Draco gets good news the following day ;D

birdsofshore April 19 2015, 22:18:35 UTC

Well! That was fabulous dub con and I adored Harry's desperation and lack of inhibition. Draco's longing for more intimacy made the scenario interesting. I'd love to know what does happen next, but this was very enjoyable by itself as well. Thanks, MA.

lomonaaeren April 19 2015, 22:26:09 UTC

Thanks so much for picking this prompt! It's one of my favorite kinks but not one I see a whole lot of, and not one that I've ever plucked up the courage to write for myself.

I really liked the way that Draco did get into it in the middle, then get dropped and disappointed at the end. I mean, not that I necessarily prefer stories with happy endings, but given that Draco didn't cast the curse and Harry wasn't really capable of giving informed consent while under it, I think this is the best ending there could be. It shows the depth of Draco's affection for Harry, certainly.

Not that it wasn't really fucking hot and hot fucking. I especially liked the fact that Draco felt heat all around him when inside Harry; it's such a common adjective, along with "tight," that it was great to see someone do something different with it.

Thanks again, mystery author!

capitu April 20 2015, 11:27:05 UTC

I love the idea of this curse. I love that Harry was aware of what he was doing only after he had done it. I wonder how he's going to feel when he wakes up?

I love Draco, how bad he felt after Harry said what he said. I think Harry wasn't accusing him, I think right that moment he was trying to make light of the situation maybe his words were much too close to how Draco felt, he just reacted and left, yet never doubt about coming back looking for Harry.

And then! Oh man, when he had everything he ever wanted and nothing he ever wanted. *heart ache*

I love to see what happens next, of course. :D

Oh my god! I just realised I completely neglected to mention Hung!Harry! :O Which, of course, I LOVED! ^^ Not enough hung!Harry in the world, and here was particularly HOT. :D

dicta_contrion April 21 2015, 13:21:21 UTC

So hot!! That was seriously scorching. Harry's neediness was palpable and the depth of Draco's emotional attachment and conflict was an excellent counterpoint to Harry's straightforward wanting. As much as I want to know what happens when Harry wakes up, I really really like this ending, that it stayed true to the parameters of the curse and left me really sympathizing with and feeling for Draco. Having all those feels plus all that hotness made this a fantastic read. Thanks, MA!