FIC: Let's Go Outside (NC-17)

Apr 20, 2014 01:30

Title: Let’s Go Outside
Author: barefacedbandit
Prompt: # 72
Summary: Harry’s done with the sofa, the hall and the kitchen table, baby.
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): EWE. Lots and lots of sex, most of it public, not all of it involving Harry/Draco, a little, er, decorative arm wrapping for fun (it might be a little bit bondage-y, but nice, you know, with silky fabric ( Read more... )

fic length: long, fic length: one shot, rating: nc-17, type: fic, author: barefacedbandit, [admin] fest-2014, kink: outdoor sex

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digthewriter April 19 2014, 17:54:39 UTC
I'm not done reading, but... It reminds him of that bit in The Empire Strikes Back where Luke cuts off his Vader’s head and sees his own lying there.

Oh my God, I love you.

That was super hot! Thanks for writing for my prompt!!

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barefacedbandit May 10 2014, 18:34:37 UTC
Okay, first of all I have to apologise for managing to hit some of your squicks. I got completely carried away and it was only when I was doing the header that I realised what I'd done, and went crying to the mods because I felt like such an arsehole. I honestly didn't expect you to read it given all this, but thank you so much for your kind words :)

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digthewriter May 10 2014, 18:45:50 UTC
I'll admit that I skimmed over the orgasm denial bit... it is one of my squicks...BUT...you wrote something for my prompt... you wrote outdoorsy sex. You wrote sex filled letters. AND you wrote a STAR WARS reference.

I like the way you wrote the story and your style is very good.

There's no need to apologize...it's not a gift exchange fic and my prompt was supposed to inspire you...and I am glad that it did. I've seen your story rec'd in various places so OBVIOUSLY others like it as well.

I am happy you wrote for my prompt and yes, not everything in it was my cup of tea, but that's really my problem and not yours.

I hope the mods were encouraging and supportive. I hope that you'll write for me again!

All the best. ♥ DIG

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barefacedbandit May 10 2014, 19:59:58 UTC
Aww, thank you DIG. The mods were fabulous. I was having a meltdown at the eleventh hour and they said pretty much exactly what you did and they said you'd be great about it. And, yes, I did indeed write a Star Wars reference, because ♥ and it made me smile that you loved that. Hey, you give fantastic prompts so I wouldn't have any hesitation in picking one again.

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helenadax April 19 2014, 18:44:14 UTC
Wow, that was HOT! Loved Harry and Draco and his kinky relationship. Harry's done being the Golden Boy, heh. And man, he's got the best friends ever. I laughed when he told Ron and Hermione that his sex life wasn't their business and they were like "We wished it wasn't".

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barefacedbandit May 10 2014, 18:46:43 UTC
Thank you so much for your comment. Hehe, yeah, he is a very naughty boy and now he's got a very naughty partner in crime!

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kurosaki_ami April 19 2014, 20:50:32 UTC
You! You evil author! What were you trying to do? Huh? Kill the poor, poor readers? Because if it was your aim, you did it! I mean, I had to pinch my nose! If the walls of my nose's veins were thinner, I would be bleeding all over already!
Honestly! It was so hot I almost died. Too much. Too much. *heavy breathing*

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barefacedbandit May 10 2014, 18:49:23 UTC
Yes, it was completely my aim to kill the readers. Poor, my arse, you loved it ;)
*hands you a tissue and a paper bag*
It's all right, love, deep breaths.

Thank you very much for your comment, you cracked me up and made my day ♥

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capitu April 19 2014, 21:09:21 UTC
****spoilers in comment (i think?)****

I love this. GOD.

I started writing this comment while reading the fic and before I knew it was nearly done with the fic and I hadn't written anything! I was just so, erm, focused, yeeeeeaaaaah, focused with the story. :D ( ... )

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barefacedbandit May 10 2014, 18:59:57 UTC
Oh my god, do you have any idea what it's like to get a comment like this on an anon fest and have to wait for flippin' ever to actually be able to say thank you? It's a nightmare! Not only is my tail wagging (which is weirding me out, let me tell you), but Harry and Draco's are as well.

Heh, I am really glad you were focused and drooling is great, you know.

LOL, I know, Draco is somewhat of an arsehole and yep, Harry needed a plumber rather urgently!

Awwww, thank you, my dear, it made me glow to get such a gorgeous comment ♥

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birdsofshore April 19 2014, 23:16:57 UTC
Fuuuuck.

I mean, fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck.

A proper comment for you tomorrow, MA, but meanwhile, I think you're my new favourite person. I'm going to follow you around like a puppy, possibly forever.

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birdsofshore April 20 2014, 19:04:07 UTC
You really blew my mind with this one, because it just had so many of my favourite things in it, to the extent I started getting all weird and feeling like it was written for me. :DD LOL, probably in RL you can't stand me or something, but, seriously, you couldn't have written a fic that was more tailored to my kinks and likes if you had tried. Even when I read in your A/N that it was a long, smutty fic with "very little plot", I was like, this is for me :D ( ... )

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barefacedbandit May 10 2014, 19:21:13 UTC
How many times have I read and reread this comment? Hmmm, about a bajillion, I reckon. And every single time I get this huge shit-eating grin to rival Draco's. Oh, I think we're going to get along just fine :D

LOL, I am really thrilled that you loved ALL OF IT. This is like the best comment ever, did you know that? The level of enthusiasm sent me stratospheric.

Yep, you got it, Luna was indeed Draco's secret partner. I quite enjoyed her being a bit shady and playing on everyone's assumption that she's bonkers when she is in fact an evil genius. I mean, who are we kidding - I really don't think that she's solved all the Ministry's problems by giving him and Draco a shove XD

Thank you so so so much for making me insanely happy with this comment, oh and for the rec on your journal! ♥♥♥

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birdsofshore May 10 2014, 20:52:00 UTC
Hee! You're very, very welcome. Your fic made me most joyful. As long as we understand one another... you are now in my debt forever, yes, and will write all of the things I want you to?

*jokingnotjoking*

:DD

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