FIC: ALPHA MALE (let him run) (NC-17)

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Title: ALPHA MALE (let him run)
Author: megyal
Prompt: # 1
Summary: Draco has a secret that will probably rip his friendship and romance with Harry to shreds.
Rating: Explicit/NC-17
Pairing(s): Draco/Harry, Draco/OMC, Pansy/OMC
Warnings: Spoilery: *Bestiality*; drug-use; some non-con; hints of bottom!Draco: I asked for modly advice and for this

Comments

[sajmalfoy13]

Very intense! I enjoyed this very much. :D The ending was great!

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[megyal]

Thank you! I'm beaming very very hard!

[frayach]

I really really enjoyed this - especially the non-linear narrative. It worked so well. I was grabbed by the first scene and pulled in by all the questions it raised. I love it when stories do that for me. And the sex was intensely hot - I was never a creature/bestiality fan until I stepped outside of my comfort zone and wrote a wolf fic myself. I was surprised by how intensely erotic human/wolf sex can be - the unsheathing of the penis and that knot that holds the mating pair together. Guh. Nicely done, author!

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[megyal]

Someone in the guessing poll thought you had written this, which is intensely flattering. This is the first bestiality fic I've written, and I'm cautiously pleased with how it turned out. Thanks very much!

[geneva2010]

I read this this morning and was so blown away. Your skill in moving the story back and forth in the timeline was really impressive.

WARNING-SPOILERS

The final obliviation of Harry hit me in the gut - I think I'm so used to reading happy endings most of the time that I didn't expect it. Harry was very convincing and loving, and I believe he could have helped Draco, but Draco couldn't risk it, couldn't believe, and that was so sad. The epilogue moves Draco even further into the dark, with Harry going to great lengths to try to save him. Don't think that I'm complaining about the ending - I thought it was great.

I didn't read your highlighted warning, so it took me awhile to figure out what Draco was doing and that it was related to his Patronus. Very, very creative.

Very well done, author.

Re: ALPHA MALE (let him run)

[megyal]

I'm mostly a happy endings kind of writer myself, so when that bit was written I thought about leaving it at that. But I'm glad I shifted it out; thanks much for your kind comment!

[hd_my_otp]

I love how you told this story, giving the reader facts & background bit by bit. And the wolf!sex was delicious. I'm a big fan of the genre.

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[megyal]

Thank you! I'm really happy you like this!

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[vaysh]

I am so pleased that someone took this odd prompt of mine and made it fly. This is such a brilliant exploration of the scenario I prompted. I love how subtly your described their growing friendship and ease with each other, and how inexplicable it must have been for Harry why Draco retreated whenever there was a chance he might top. And you captured the split personality of Draco, the redeemed Obliviator, and Draco the wolf!Animagus so very well. Definitely a stroke of genius to make Draco an Obliviator for this story. I loved how torn he is between the wild sexual need of the wolf and his human desire to not hurt or scare anyone. The scene with Benji was rather brilliant in that respect. And OMG, the ending. I loved that you didn't take the easy way out and left us with Harry's overly optimistic "We figure it out". The solution you offered was so much more convincing: I can see Harry and Draco quite happily having sex in their wolf forms. :) Kudos for your Harry. I adore that line of Draco's that Harry only displays wandless magic

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[megyal]

*relieved* I so SO PLEASED you like the solution! And I'm such a sucker for happy endings, but I wasn't sure how happy an ending this could be. Thanks for the prompt, it was so interesting to explore!