FIC: Wishing Candles (PG-13)

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Title: Wishing Candles (a.k.a. The Day My Children Appeared Before Me)
Author: emi_chirescue
Prompt: # 134
Summary: When two children suddenly appear on the Malfoy's doorstep, claim Draco's their Father, and their last names have an added hyphen of Potter, Draco's most coveted wish comes true. Too bad nobody's told Harry about this wish.
Rating: PG, maybe PG-13

Comments

[icicle33]

This fic was very sweet and the children adorable. I really hope you will continue with more of this.

[emi_chirescue]

Thank you! And I will:)

[shantismurf]

This was a great premise and I love the AU you've created here, but this felt terribly rushed, and would benefit greatly from the feedback of a beta to help tighten up and clarify things. Honestly this felt like a single chapter in what should be a 100k fic or more! I feel as if I'm left with more questions than answers about the new trio of Potters, their abilities and the whole disowning/ritual thing. I felt it very odd that the Malfoys (and everyone else for that matter) didn't question why and how the children appeared in the first place. Simply saying "Dumbledore is working on it" leaves out so much potential for describing how they would ultimately be returned to their time. Whenever the boys interacted with the children it was wonderfully sweet. There's a lot of potential for slow development of deeper feelings there too! Your imagery, especially when describing characters, was great too. It's a huge undertaking to tackle a big AU like this, but you have great ideas and, more importantly, great characters here to work with!

[songquake]

Wait--what?

Where's the rest of the story????

I mean, it's well-written, and the kids are wonderful, and I'm SO GLAD that Harry's finally cluing in, but, but...

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?

If your muse lets you write more in this 'verse, I'd be VERY eager to read it!

[emi_chirescue]

Thanks! And don't worry - I will be writing more! I wanted to, but I was worried that it may become too long for the fest.

But I am already working on fixing it up and expanding on more of the ideas:)

[songquake]

Awesome! I look forward to reading it, whenever you have more!

[silent_cynic]

Wow, I totally just discovered this story and it's utterly fantastic! Please please please continue! I mean, it's brilliant as is, but I would love to see more of this universe.

[sweetteeone]

I just came across this fic and I loved it, but I'm hoping you would add More to this story.
Really enjoyed this fic so please add more chapters.