FIC: Spanner in the Works (NC-17)

Apr 12, 2012 15:09

Title: Spanner in the Works
Author: pretty_panther
Prompt: # 32
Summary: Astoria has dragged Draco to Australia for a different sort of holiday. With Australia's wizarding population being so spread out, the Malfoys find themselves in a Muggle bar, owned by one Harry Potter. Stunned, Draco decides he wants to know more, thinking he is the first to stumble across ( Read more... )

author: pretty_panther, fic length: short, rating: nc-17, type: fic, contains: infidelity, [admin] fest-2012

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ashiiblack April 12 2012, 13:53:04 UTC
Wow! This was a really unexpected ending! Loved it! I loved the snarky comments during the sex too!

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evening12 April 12 2012, 13:55:46 UTC
Missed being the first one by a little bit. Your story threw me off. hahaha. I am so used to happy ending where Draco finds out why Harry left or its implied that they will meet again. Now I am wondering...what happened to Harry. Who is he now? Good work!

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niekebieke April 12 2012, 14:16:43 UTC
This was an overal enjoyable read, but the ending made it PERFECT. I was really liking it - Draco & Astoria in Muggle place, the stumbling across Harry who is different, the flirting, the smutty scene etc, but it all seemed like a well-executed story using well-worn story props and then the ending blew all the clicheness away.
Yeah, your Harry had changed, but I really hadn't expected that ending ... although when rereading it you can see that you had been guiding us to there, it was just so subtley!!! So great job.

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dracolyn April 12 2012, 14:29:37 UTC
Aaaw

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sisi_rambles April 12 2012, 15:12:10 UTC
Oh that was fun The ending was what made it really awesome. I'm glad you made Harry Obliviate them both. It shows how he really isn't the same hero anymore.

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