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dracoqueen22

Flash Fiction Fills Take 64 Part Five

Nov 30, 2015 15:56

For fulcrum is the bomb
Prompt: Krok helps Spinister through a panic attack

( He needs to get away -- go away. )

transformers: idw, transformers: crossover, transformers: prime, transformers: g1, transformers, transformers: mtmte

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dracoqueen22 November 30 2015, 21:14:09 UTC

XD. And then a third time when I upload them to Database in Transmission. LOLOLOL

Thank you!

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anonymous November 30 2015, 21:30:35 UTC

Hi, stranger. Haven't seen you commenting on here too often of late. :D

Skywinder/Starfire201

anonymous November 30 2015, 21:36:16 UTC

1) Interesting dynamic you gave to Krok and Spinster there, but it seems to fit with other characterizations I've seen of the two.

2)Favorite lines: a) "For one, I don’t threaten, I promise." That is indeed true. *nods sharply* b) ""That’s kind of unfair, isn’t it?” Tracks proposed, and oh Primus, he was going to die." Yes, I imagine he was scared out of his wits and slept with one optic open for a while. Although that's probably nothing compared to what he did to Smokescreen. :D

Jazz is a perfect protective "dad". :D

3) Kind of cute.

Skywinder/Starfire201

dracoqueen22 December 1 2015, 00:54:01 UTC

1) Thank you! First time I ever wrote the two and I wasn't sure of the characterization, but it was a great challenge!

2) Smokescreen will never sleep again at this rate. He'd request a transfer but there's nowhere else to go. XD

3) Thank you!!!

anonymous December 1 2015, 23:25:31 UTC

2) LOL Oh, now I have images in my head. ^_^

Skywinder/Starfire201