When long isn't quite long enough.

[draconicrose]

So chapter 12 is being written and already has enough size to publish and be according to standards of previous chapters. Problem is, it hasn't reached the status where I feel "this chapter is done". So, yes, it's going to take a while longer to finish and post. Sorry about that to all impatient people.

I'm trying something in this chapter to help

Comments

[biggles_barat]

I hope you'll be publishing it soon. When I write I find that it is handy to use a theasaurus. If you ever want some help just send me a message : )

[draconicrose]

Oh I make use of a thesaurus often, it's just that the alternatives to most vers, like 'to do' (acquit oneself, appear, bear, carry, come on like, comport, conduct, demean, etc) don't actually sound any good. And lets not forget, while Gareth is well read and has an above-average vocabulary he's not a literary genious and the story is being told in first person.