Comments | dracolyte: I WILL NOT WRITE SMUT IN CLASS, ESPECIALLY WHEN THERE ARE OTHER PEOPLE AROUND

dracolyte

I WILL NOT WRITE SMUT IN CLASS, ESPECIALLY WHEN THERE ARE OTHER PEOPLE AROUND

Aug 20, 2004 17:27

( Untitled. Rated NC-17 for...um...adult content. )

Comments 6

starlighttears August 20 2004, 01:21:21 UTC

I really liked that.
Though, in the initial post, you should put down pairing, rating, author, etc.

The word is spelled "submissively"

Overall, it's a really good ficlet.

dracolyte August 20 2004, 01:31:20 UTC

oh whoops! I'll fix the typo. thanks :)

anonymous August 20 2004, 03:56:07 UTC

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dracolyte August 20 2004, 04:40:07 UTC

uh, who are you?

rubykate August 20 2004, 04:20:23 UTC

This is very pretty, I love the imagery :) I like the way you use parentheses too :)

dracolyte August 20 2004, 04:39:52 UTC

thanks! :)