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hikari_riku in dracoharry100

Stalking Is The Most Fun... - Edited [Team Death Eaters]

Feb 20, 2008 12:06

Title: Stalking Is The Most Fun A Boy Can Have Without Taking Off His Clothes
Author: Hikari Riku
Team: Death Eaters
Word count: 100
Characters/pairings: Draco/Harry
Challenge: #57 Stalking
Authors Notes: Forgive me, I know I'm probably getting on peoples nerves... I edited everything, and In the event that you can see those stupid lines...ignore them. ( Read more... )

hikari_riku, stalking

Comments 4

lijahlover February 20 2008, 20:38:09 UTC

I liked this because it was very well writen and *HOT*

lackofmendacity February 21 2008, 04:16:45 UTC

Like I said before, I really like how you use enjambment in this poem, it seems to mirror Harry and Draco's game of cat and mouse... and ooh, I just discovered your hidden message within the drabble - what a delightful twist. :D

enchanted_jae February 21 2008, 05:38:38 UTC

I really enjoy the format; I wish we had more poetry in H/D.

Go Team Death Eaters! twistedm February 21 2008, 06:27:18 UTC

ooh! so glad someone mentioned a hdden message because it gave me the impetus to look for it myself. plus, i agree. hot! i think especially the part about someone getting pressed into the cold stone wall. yeah...