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The Purple Snitch

Mar 09, 2014 14:22

Title: The Purple Snitch
Rating: PG 13
Word Count: 1,780
Warning: Mostly gen, hints of Harry/Draco
Summary: The Eighth Years won't let a silly storm stop them from playing a game of 'Quidditch'.
Author's notes: Written for hd_writers Wizarding Games 2014. Prompts as below:
Assignment 1: Knight takes Queen, Card Games, Cheering, Rained Out ( Read more... )

fluff, minerva, neville, hooch, flangst, oneshot, quidditch, harry, ron, humour, hogwarts era, dean, hermione, blaise, draco, gen, hd_writers challenge: wizarding games, theo

Comments 15

fantasyfiend09 March 9 2014, 20:18:20 UTC

I'm all misty eyed. This was really beautiful. They were all having so much fun and playing with such abandon, and after what they've been through they all deserve it as much as they need it. You really captured their frustration and restlessness at the start, which made their antics on the field as touching as they were funny. Oh, and I would have loved watching them butcher the noble game of Quidditch with such obvious glee. I want to hug all of them and make them cocoa.

enchanted_jae March 9 2014, 22:53:40 UTC

I don't know whether to smile or sniffle.

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*smacks you for being contrary*

adafrog March 9 2014, 23:57:55 UTC

Oh wow, that was perfect.

jachelle0627 March 10 2014, 00:04:05 UTC

Absolutely lovely story. My heart soared along with the Eighth Years as they flew about in the rain making up the rules as they went along. My heart broke a little along with Madame Hooch and Headmistress McGonagall as they reflected upon "the children" who had to grow up way to fast. You have such a way of evoking emotions through your writing. I enjoy reading everything you write.

roelliej March 11 2014, 21:00:04 UTC

That was such a lovely and fluffy story, hon! :D

“It’s alright, Rolanda,” she said, soothing her irate colleague. “They’re just children.”

They're just making up for their lost childhood. :D

I totally love this story! <3