Two and a Half Men # 4: My Kid

Aug 19, 2013 16:56

Title: My Kid
Word Count: 1,800
Rating: PG 13
Warning: Slight flangst, implied violence
Summary: An incident in Diagon Alley sparks Harry's protective instincts.
Author's notes: Part 4 of my Two and a Half Men arc. I'm just churning these out now. This one...went a bit in flangsty territory. My bad. On the bright side, Protective!Harry ^_^

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fluff, protective, ron, harry, hermione, next gen, flangst, draco, established, two and a half men arc, drarry

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dracogotgame August 21 2013, 04:58:03 UTC
Thank you so much :)

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hazel_wand August 19 2013, 15:45:54 UTC
I need to leave you feedback that's more than just awwwww but .... Awwwww! Protective!Harry and four scoop Scorpius were just lovely. And I really liked the Harry/Draco interaction at the end.

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dracogotgame August 21 2013, 04:58:32 UTC
Haha, 'aww' is perfect, no worries! So glad you're enjoying this <3

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0idontknow0 August 19 2013, 18:04:50 UTC
Smith sure did have it coming.
And I can't get over how adorable Scorpius is.

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dracogotgame August 21 2013, 04:59:01 UTC
D'awww you!

He certainly did *nods*

Scorpius has grown on me too <3

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fantasyfiend09 August 19 2013, 18:40:03 UTC
I am so full of squeeee!! I loved Ron sharing his food with Scorpius, calling him Mini Malfoy, referring to him as Harry's kid, and telling Harry to give Smith hell. *hugs him too tight* And I love Hermione's opening line about how they don't need to ask if it's serious. The acceptance they both showed filled me with warm fuzzy feels.

I loved the waitress just smirking and promising the bill. *grins*

Smith! He's my favourite character to hate. For some reason I see the possibility of redemption in most everyone else, but he just irks me. So Bam! sounds like a great idea to me!

Draco was lovely in the way he made sure Harry knew that he wasn't buying the door story but also trusted Harry's judgement about whether Smith deserved what he got. Him trusting Harry with his son's safety is so sweet!!

I love this arc SO much!!

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dracogotgame August 21 2013, 05:01:21 UTC
Thanks so much, lovely! I couldn't resist throwing some Ron/Scorpius interaction in there. And Hermione is such a darling, I just can't do anything except write nice things about her :D

The waitress was a fun touch for me, I enjoy writing in these OCs.

Gaah, Smith! I know right? I think he just earned himself a permanent spot on the wall of shame for pushing first years as he tried to escape the battle. *cough* douche *cough*

Thank you so so so much! You're an absolute princess <3

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bella526 August 19 2013, 19:03:23 UTC
So cute! I'm so glad you continued this arc- it's simply adorable. ~_~

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dracogotgame August 21 2013, 05:01:43 UTC
Aww, me too! Thank you so much, sweetie!

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