Together

[dracogotgame]

Title: Together
Rating: R (because bullying makes me sad)
Word Count: 1,600
Summary: The Malfoy Potter boys stick together. 
Author's notes: Written for awdt's prompt: Is this what you've been waiting for? I was in the mood for powerful! in charge! Harry. This is what my brain came up with
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter. This was written for fun

Comments

[floradelaney]

I love the idea of people underestimating Harry and got to regret it. And their little family protecting their own. Great!

[dracogotgame]

Thank you ^^

[lijahlover]

Woot you *go* Harry :)

I loved this so much there is something sexy about a protective strong Harry. :)

Oh and bullying makes me sad to :(

[dracogotgame]

Thanks, luv <3

Yeah, bullies suck. Booo!

[0idontknow0]

That lady is... like a tame Umbridge.

And poor Scorpius.

I absolutely loved Harry though, haha. Turned into the scariest man alive (next to Draco) when his children were hurt. I think that Prudence (her name fits her by the way) might have forgotten that Harry beat old Voldy when he was a kid. I don't know how she expected to intimidate him in any way.

[dracogotgame]

Thanks <3

I always thought Harry would be quite the fearsome lion where his kids were involved *swoons* :D

Silly Prudence, indeed

[susannah_wilde]

I love how the brothers are so protective of each other! And I can only imagine Draco's reaction if he had gone instead of Harry.

[dracogotgame]

I <3 protective brothers :)

Draco would have hexed her, I'm sure *nods*

[fantasyfiend09]

You created a great villain in Prudence. Ugh. I love that you wrote it from her pov so that we could see each miscalculation. I can totally imagine Harry having the reputation of being a teddy bear if it's among people who had never threatened his loved ones. Maybe Prudence will pass the word. And she really is lucky that she dealt with Harry over Draco. *shivers imagining a furious Draco*
I loved the very beginning where we get to see James Sirius perfectly imitating his namesakes. Such a little Marauder! And yet it's so sweet to see him worrying about Scorpius. Poor little Scorpius.
I really like how you handled the themes of bullying, parenting, abuse of authority, and prejudice.

[dracogotgame]

Oh wow, thank you! OCs are ridiculously hard for me, so I'm glad you took a shine to Prudence :)

And you're definitely right about Harry being an absolute doll, until someone is stupid/careless/suicidal enough to threaten his children. As for Draco...brrr. Let's just say Prudence dodged a bullet there.

Yeah, poor Scorpius. *snuggles him* But he's got his family looking out for him. Including a protective big brother and very intimidating parents *squees*