PHASE I FIC: Playing the Cad by grander_fanfics (R)

[dracomods]

Title: Playing the Cad
Author: grander_fanfics
Pairing(s): Draco/Hermione
Rating: Soft R
Warnings: Masturbation (mostly implied), course language, sexual innuendo
Word Count: ~7300
Genre(s): Romance/Humor
Summary: Draco drives Hermione crazy, but not in a good way. What happens when he realizes he might have feelings for her? Can he change his ways before

Comments

[reg_flint]

Light and airy and still meaningful. I always forget there's a fluffy side, because Severus is such my angst muse. I love a little fresh air. That redeemed!Draco is still fully Slytherin is a delight to me.
Delight all round.
Delightful story.

[ningloreth]

LOL! I really agree with Draco's commentary on Edward Scissorhands! (And I loved the bit where Hermione opened the door and punched him!)

[luvscharlie]

This may be the only time you get a review that's almost as long as your fic!

First of all, you've included Edward Scissorhands! Edward Scissorhands for gods sake! How I love you for that.

And you've painted the scene so vividly. I love this part! "Easy, Granger! I was just wondering how you're supposed to fight a guy with knives for hands. Oi! See, see, he stabbed him, just like I said. Way to go, Choppy!"

"This was worse than my great-grandmother's eightieth birthday party, and I got hexed during that," Draco griped as he nudged his leg further under Hermione's rump. "Twice." Oh Draco-You're such a boy!

This is just so vivid-I can totally see him making the faces and pissing her off. "Maybe if you had any feelings inside that bloody heart of yours," she huffed as she snatched the metal rectangle out of his hands, "you'd understand the cathartic experience of shar- Oh! If you're just going to pull faces I'm going to bed."Very Hermione-I love how you kept them in character and STILL made them work. Honestly, I'd read this

[dracodew17]

On the art: This is a really nice piece. I loved your use of color in it and I especially like what you chose for Draco's clothes. Very well done.

On the fic: That was a fun one-shot. I could just imagine Draco's reaction when Hermione first started the Monday movie nights and all the girls were invading his common room. I loved the running theme throughout the piece of Hermione just trying to get Draco to shut up and listen for once. And the kiss and the exchange at the very end was just perfect. I must admit, I'm curious what movie they watched in the theater, but not knowing doesn't lessen the gesture of Draco agreeing to go with her in the slightest. Great job! ♥

I told you I was gonna read it some time :)

[bendleshnitz1]

I want to see the end."

"You're about to see the end of my fist

LMAO

Does a big sobfest make you feel a sense of solidarity with your fellow witches?"

Priceless

No need to get your knickers all twisted." He crossed his arms under his head as he sent her a wink. "And I've seen your knickers. You don't want them twisting any farther up your arse."

Oh, Draco...

Draco seducing Hermione is so freaking hilarious!

Just admit it now and we'll have that much more time tonight to sweat-up my sheets."

Subtle Draco, very subtle *roll eyes* lol

"Tell you what. You can punch me in the gut if you want, you know, to make things ev-"

Draco nearly fell over when her door swung open and Hermione's fist flew into his stomach.

lol don't say things you don't mean Draco.

"But half the fun is watching it with you," he complained, leaning his head against the door frame and putting on his most conciliatory face. "Aw, come on, Granger. I said I was sorry. Am I really that awful?"

God, isn't he charming...♥

I bruise like a peach and Madame

Re: I told you I was gonna read it some time :)

[bendleshnitz1]

;) I sadly don't have the time to read long fics of over 5K often, so I try to give them extra attention. Especially cause I know the time and love they require. It's only fair to receive more than a "nice fic" when you spent time plotting and writing :)
It was a great fic!