There is a contest coming up next week and I was working on something this morning to submit. I've renamed it and I'm hoping that it has improved a little:
I definitely feel the tension in here, and it reminded me so much of some people in high school or college with whom I'd try to connect, saying I wrote too, but they gave off this superior vibe like I was nothing better than shit and I should worship their whinings. Gosh. No hope for friendship right there. No one could break their barriers.
Great work and so interesting. I loved the fact that it was so anonymous and that the reader could imagine themselves in the narrator's stead.
Thanks so much. I'm trying for that. I'm trying to keep it from being too distinct, but distinct enought anyone who reads it and met a person thinks, 'This! Yes! I know this person' or 'I felt this way'
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Great work and so interesting. I loved the fact that it was so anonymous and that the reader could imagine themselves in the narrator's stead.
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