Dear Kasheem:

Mar 22, 2008 22:03

I've been feeling sort of low and so I decided to take a break from Stone since he's been emo lately. Instead, I'm going to try and work on my Summon Slave bit. All that you read below the cut is a rough draft that I'm creating off the cuff on LJ. Any comments are always loved and appreciated.
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alucarddracula March 25 2008, 04:40:48 UTC
I can tell this was a really good writing day for you. This is exactly what I wanted from this story of yours--this is SO much better than the stuff you sent me before Christmas! The characters are more... real, rather than just vehicles of dialogue. The emotions are vivid, and though you can't always tell what they are thinking, you are engaged in the conversation with them. I is proud of joo!

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