Comments | draco_somnians: Create-your-own bad!fic!! Now with Vampires...

draco_somnians

Create-your-own bad!fic!! Now with Vampires...

Dec 11, 2009 00:48

LOL, this has amused me greatly. Go here and preview a sample of your Personalised Teen Novel Unfortunately there are only two samples/previews, I had to do it. I just had to.

Thank you a_loquita for the link. Heh.

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lolz

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not_a_zatarc December 11 2009, 03:30:28 UTC

LMAO. Is it sad that this makes me want to write Jack/Sam teen!fic? x_0; lol.

draco_somnians December 11 2009, 23:33:20 UTC

*snort*

I'm sure you can do it better, but I'm not sure it should be done at all. Ever. Lol.

not_a_zatarc December 12 2009, 03:19:00 UTC

Hahaha! XD I don't recall ever reading any that really blew me away, but I prefer kid!fix. XP

not_a_zatarc December 11 2009, 03:44:34 UTC

Gotta love the insta-smut ones! LOL.

Jack slid in beside Sam in the back of the silver, stretch limousine and within moments they were locked in a passionate kiss. Briefly pulling away from him Sam reached to the door and hit the button raising the glass partition and then returned to run her fingers through his silver hair.
“Its been a long time, Jack,” she whispered seductively, as she pressed her parted lips against his. He felt the smooth wetness of the gloss from her lips reignite the stirring in his body that had been smoldering all night. His desire could not be contained and he reached up pulling her closer, feeling her silky smoothness. Not to be outdone, Sam removed his bow tie and began to quickly unfasten the buttons on his shirt as Jack lifted her dress, and pulled her over him, her legs straddling his lap.
“Sam,” Jack moaned raggedly, as she released the button securing his pants...

Over-use of the words 'smooth' and 'silky smoothness' makes me laugh. XD

draco_somnians December 11 2009, 23:35:19 UTC

'smooth' + 'silky smooth' = virgin. And everyone knows that's hot and also romantic.

not_a_zatarc December 12 2009, 03:19:53 UTC

LOL.

chozen_rogue December 12 2009, 04:26:55 UTC

*headesk* You so went there, didn't you?! LOL!!!

Now I really want to right mini!Jack/mini!Sam...

draco_somnians December 12 2009, 11:39:23 UTC

Uh oh...if this inflicts a lot of teen!Sam/teen!Jack fic on fandom, I will feel quite guilty. Lol.

Now I'm wondering if I can get away with making teen!fic believable enough for the Day of Indulgence challenge. LOL!