Mistaken

[jaded_icy_rose]

Title: Mistaken
Author: Raven jaded_icy_rose
Rating: R
Warnings: Language, Violence
Summary: After one night of pure passion, they wake up together. Chapter Twenty-Two: Harry worries about Susan and Ginny and the babies they carry while Draco comes to a new revealation and Ron connects with his captor.
Disclaimer: *sighs* Honestly, who thinks I own them? If

Comments

[spuffy_seeker]

ooohhh!!! new 'mistaken' i am so glad that you updated.

ten points for me!!! i was so hoping that it was Lucius and to have him working with a Weasley was just brilliant.

poor Draco, locked up with that nasty slag all over him. and now i am most curious as to Pansy's comment at the end!? you naughty thing leaving us poor readers in such a lurch.

i must say that i enjoyed the susan/harry interaction. nicely done, i mean i am sympathetic towards her and i am never that way with OC's. now i realize Susan isn't an OC but neither is she a primary character, so you have essentially taken an old character and made her new, but i am rambling.

good job covering all the bases, minus Hermione!!! (evil thing you) and leaving me begging you for more!

~Sara~

[jaded_icy_rose]

Hee! *happily gives you a gold star* Good job.

And what can I say? I like being evil and not telling you what's going to happen next. *hugs Draco* And I know, I hate writing how Pansy's all over him, ick, but sadly, it must be written.

Thanks for the compliment about Susan/Harry. I tried really hard to make sure that I wasn't going overboard. I've been in a relationship where I've been cheated on and I did what Harry would've done and I dumped his ass (though he deserved it). I figured that Susan would be a little more tied to her heart. She's a Hufflepuff - I've been sorted a Slytherin; so she'd do the opposite of me, rigt? LOL. That make any sense? Glad you like her! And hey, look, I'm rambling too!

And thanks again for the comment! And I promise, Hermione will make an appearence where she's at least awake (because she is currently unconcious, lol)

[silencing]

I'm so happy you updated! Very nice chapter. Still upset that there's no d/hr right now, but I'm accepting that because I like your plot line!

Whee! Can't wait for more

[jaded_icy_rose]

Aww, thank you for dealing with no D/Hr. I promise...soon? LOL. I'm going to update as soon as I can, but I'm glad you're enjoying it. Keep looking for more!

[pikku_enkeli88]

Finally a new chapter!!! Great done but I want Hermione and Draco together. :D :D

[campustree]

I really REALLY liked the part where Harry talks about who he took turn blaming....very beautifully written - same with Susan's. :)

ooh LUCIUS!! And I just had to grin when I read "It’s understandable why your wife slammed you against a wall now." I liked it how you kept on mentioning that - during Harry and Susan's chat, too.

“Yes, well, as much as that’s appreciated that can do nothing to bring back my wife or help my son. So instead of having a bloody soul to soul chat with a Weasley, I prefer to get back to work.” I gotta say, I don't think I've ever loved Lucius this much before. hahah.

...still trust you with writing some more D/Hr love...*tries to convince self*. :D Thanks, Raven!