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A Sense of Self, Chapter 11

Nov 27, 2011 21:53

A Sense of Self, Chapter 11: 2007 - Washington, D.C.
Author: Dr. B
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Emily/JJ
Rating: FRT
Summary: Being an undercover agent seemed like the obvious choice; Emily had spent her childhood pretending to be someone she wasn’t in order to please her politician parents or to survive always being the new kid at school. After her ( Read more... )

a sense of self, criminal minds, jj, prentiss, fanfic

Comments 2

anonymous December 2 2011, 10:33:57 UTC

I just stumbled upon your story and I REALLY like it ( ... )

Thanks! dr_b_natural December 3 2011, 01:03:18 UTC

Thanks for such a thoughtful review. It's always nice to hear what someone thinks about this story - whether they agree, disagree, etc. With respect to the speed at which Emily is opening up to JJ - I think the desire to open up to her has been there for a while, she just didn't know how to do it. At least not honestly, at first, but she's learning and becoming a little more comfortable with herself and her past. But I'm a big fan of the slow build so they won't be hopping into bed in the next 10 seconds (sorry to anyone who's disappointed).