Sonata, Chapter 3

[dr_anitacoffee]

Title: Sonata
Pairing: House/Cuddy (Canon can suck it)
Warnings: Some difficult material in later chapters and some moderately naughty bits in this one.
Summary: "She sees their child’s eyes, sapphire and slate and aquamarine, a thousand shades of blue in rapid succession." House and Cuddy face a new chapter in their relationship.
Disclaimer: I don't

Comments

[flippet]

I can't believe I haven't commented on this story before.

Your prose is stunning. Your characterizations are amazing. The whole thing has this languid, warm velvet feel. It's beautiful and engrossing. I can't wait for more, though your note has made me apprehensive.

I love that Rachel squealed...naturally. :-)

And therapy...be still, my heart.

[dr_anitacoffee]

Thank you - and I agree, how did TPTB expect us to think Rachel wouldn't rat out House at the first opportunity?

I love your description of languid and velvet, although I suspect House would have something naughty to say about other warm, velvet things.

[jhsc22]

Love it. More, more!

[dr_anitacoffee]

I promise it will be updated at some point, eventually. When...is a different story.

[tauwja]

Asdfghjklasdfghjklasdfgh perfect ♥ ♥ I love this story so much :D ♥ Glad the inspiration came back to you! :D

[dr_anitacoffee]

You can thank the House marathon that aired "Euphoria" back to back with "Who's Your Daddy." Always gets my writing motor going.

[jwhite2199]

I think I felt my uterus contract at that last line of dialogue. At the very least, my stomach did a flip. ;)

I'm so glad you took your time and re-found your writing mojo on this. The voices are fantastic and your prose is *so* sharp. I love how, in their own little ways, H&C are both working toward coming to terms with their own roles, as potential parents and as a couple as well.

Wonderful update; many, many thanks.

[dr_anitacoffee]

Thank you - I feel a little unsteady in terms of my prose voice lately, so I'm glad you like it. And yeah...men plus babies always equals uterine cartwheels.

[miss_everdeen]

OMG, I love this so much! This is a really nice read especially after all that disaster for the finale. Thank you for writing this.

Aww, a baby with his eyes, it's just so cute. Normally I try to stay away from baby fics, but this is just wonderful. It is so believable. I cannot wait for this story to be updated. Good job!

[dr_anitacoffee]

I usually dislike baby fics, too, which is why I wanted to write something and try to avoid all of the pitfalls that usually make me want to gag. Hopefully it will continue to be believable.