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Blue Skies and Pain, Part One

Jun 22, 2014 10:01

Reid stood outside ICU room #5, staring at the sleeping figure in the bed. His heart raced in his chest, and his stomach rolled. He thought he might be sick. He eyed the garbage can in the corner, wondering how many steps it would take him to get there ( Read more... )

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Comments 29

shadownyc June 22 2014, 15:45:56 UTC

Very powerful! I hope part 2 finds some hope for a LuRe reunion.

dpracket June 22 2014, 22:50:27 UTC

We shall see. Reid has moved on with someone he cares about, and Luke is not the same person he was when he left. Thanks for reading and commenting.

scotianova June 24 2014, 19:49:20 UTC

I am mentally expericening with the concept of Reid being with someone else for a long time...;)

Great piece!

amyafa June 22 2014, 18:24:52 UTC

Ah. Reid does obviously care about Luke. But he has a boyfriend.
And he would not step into any relationship lithely.

Poor Luke.

Obviously he went trough a lot. I hope he will be alright.

Intriguing.

dpracket June 22 2014, 22:57:01 UTC

Luke did go through a lot, and he's got to stand on his own two feet.

You are correct about Reid's He relationship, and he's not a cheater, so this should be interesting. He cares more for Luke than he wants to believe. He's not one to give people second chances when they've hurt him, not because he wants to be a jerk, it's more a self preservation tactic he had to adopt early in life.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sooooo glad you write again!!! insanityme04 June 22 2014, 20:19:04 UTC

Amazing like always!! Can´t wait for more…

Re: Sooooo glad you write again!!! dpracket June 22 2014, 22:58:10 UTC

Thanks so much! :-)

cindergal June 22 2014, 20:23:38 UTC

Intriguing start! I hope you find time to write more soon.

dpracket June 22 2014, 22:58:32 UTC

Thank you. Me too! ;)

mickey9928 June 22 2014, 21:32:35 UTC

Always love your stories and this is no exception! Totally didn't see that ending coming. Who is this boyfriend and how did he worm his way into Reid's life and dare I say heart??? It is obvious that Reid isn't over Luke so please tell me there is a chance for them!

Would it be safe to assume Noah is a major douche in this??? That is the idea I'm getting at least. :)

dpracket June 22 2014, 23:05:22 UTC

Yes, it's safe to assume that Noah's not nice, but I won't be focusing much on it. Part of Luke's problem is Noah, but he also needs to take some personal responsibility for his bad decisions.

As far as Reid's boyfriend goes, he's a good guy, and he was exactly what Reid needed to heal. This makes me sad because no matter what happens, I'm going to break someone's heart in this fic. Wah! :(

Thanks for reading and commenting.