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Original: Midnight In an Empty Bed; G

Aug 25, 2008 16:16

Title: Midnight In an Empty Bed
prompt_in_a_box: Round #6
Prompt #9: Why didn't you tell me?
Word Count: 257 (According to MW)
Genre: Angst
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Fandom: Original
Pairing/Character: POV of the speaker
Summary: A poem like short fic. One is left to wonder how they could have protected the other...

( I stretch across the void/and touch the black/you are still gone/breaking my heart over and over )

short fic: original, genre: angst, writer: chris4short, rated: g

Comments 3

luxuria_oceanus August 26 2008, 00:15:09 UTC

Ooooh, poem. Preeetty. It flows freely, not a lot of rhymes and rhythm, but it has meaning, which is all that should count in a poem *glares at all the English professors who say otherwise*

chris4short August 26 2008, 03:50:33 UTC

i should note here, or in an A/N, that my idea of poem is NOTHING like the "proper" terms of a poem. Hence why I don't call myself or some of my writing like that, poems. Maybe free-verse is more encompassng and better of a discripter... and i feel myself slipping into the non-existant english teacher in me... oi.

luxuria_oceanus August 27 2008, 00:27:44 UTC

*snorts* Yup, me thinks so.