When the war is over ficlet

Apr 19, 2012 15:47

Title: Windows to the Soul
Author: Aussie
Rated: T
Characters: Edith, Patrick
(300) words

different how? )

character: patrick gordon, challenge 10: when the war is over, author: bsg_aussiegirl, character: edith crawley

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redrockcan April 19 2012, 11:48:51 UTC
Another great Edith drabble!! She really is such an interesting character. Her nervousness is perfect against Patrick's directness and how his words shake her so deeply. Very bittersweet scene for them both when we know the outcome. I keep wondering if he will show up again.

PS-One of my favourite songs by the way and most appropriate in the DA setting.

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bsg_aussiegirl April 19 2012, 11:57:18 UTC
You know Cold Chisel songs in Canada? WTF? *snort*

I loved the Patrick/Edith storyline. I know it's cliched and has been done in a million romance novels, but I still enjoyed it. That's the sort of sappy thing I am! :)

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akachankami April 19 2012, 12:44:48 UTC
i love your edith!!! ♥ i'm so happy she's getting some love by you =D
“Please, Edith,” he called softly. “When the war is over, look for love, not just a husband.”
oh dear, let's hope she finds The One, after all she's been through... S3 must be her season!

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bsg_aussiegirl April 19 2012, 12:50:00 UTC
Hee. Just don't ask me to love all the characters. *snort*

JF seems to stumble when writing canon relationships, so perhaps fanfic is a better place for her to hang out in?

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