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New Beginnings entry

Mar 18, 2012 20:54

Title: At the Start
Author: crazymaryt
Rating: T
Character/s: Carson/Mrs Hughes
Word Count: 300 (if you don't count the title and quote)

( She's never slept with anyone before. )

challenge 06: new beginnings, character: charles carson, author: crazymaryt, character: mrs elsie hughes

Comments 17

alemandine March 19 2012, 01:11:22 UTC

THIS IS ADORABLE.

Love this exchange:
“Are you going to stare at me all morning?” he asked breaking her reverie.

“Maybe. It’s only 5.30. We still have time before breakfast.”

crazymaryt March 19 2012, 02:08:54 UTC

Thank you so much for reading.

They are so fun to write playfulness for.

alemandine March 19 2012, 03:29:15 UTC

They're just so adorable and you've got such a talent for capturing them. I totally see the ship on the show, but I can never quite wrap my head around how exactly one of them makes the first move! I guess that's why I just need to start reading some more fanfiction!!

crazymaryt March 19 2012, 10:34:21 UTC

Thank you again.

You should read more C/E. It's such a wonderful part of the Downton fandom.

nixmom March 19 2012, 01:22:51 UTC

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Now you just need to fill in the blanks as to what got us here. Yeah for Carson/Hughes and yeah for you for jumping back in!

crazymaryt March 19 2012, 02:11:44 UTC

Thank you.

I may do a prequel of sorts. It was kind of hard to keep the story to so little words.

alemandine March 19 2012, 03:35:08 UTC

I second the need for a prequel.

akachankami March 19 2012, 01:40:08 UTC

=D married!!!! *squeeeeeee* i love this new beginning! XD

crazymaryt March 19 2012, 02:12:19 UTC

Thank you. I had a lot of fun with this drabble.

northeto March 19 2012, 01:53:15 UTC

This is lovely! It's such a nice intimate moment and I love that it is really about their friendship and marriage and it's not really about the physical intimacy as it is about them learning more about each other. And I also really like what a warm, happy feeling this has. Well done.

crazymaryt March 19 2012, 02:13:37 UTC

Thank you for reading.

I do think these two lend themselves to quiet romance. But don't get me wrong I love me some smut. LOL

bsg_aussiegirl March 19 2012, 07:57:40 UTC

You wrote something!!!!!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!

And it's Elsie and Charles in bed together!!!!!!!! And married!!!!!!!! Woo-hoo!!!!!

I actually love the fact that Carson is snoring, you know. Bit of reality there! :)

♥

crazymaryt March 19 2012, 10:36:03 UTC

It's a bit of a miracle isn't it? LOL

It's so much fun to have these two married. I can't stop myself from picturing it. I'm such a sap where these two are concerned.

bsg_aussiegirl March 19 2012, 10:53:48 UTC

I was thinking about something from my little retirement series for this challenge, too. The whole 'new beginnings' made me think of them being married immediately! LOL

It's a good miracle!

crazymaryt March 20 2012, 00:12:39 UTC

Oh yes please do something from that series. I loved those.