Transitions: Chapter 3

[serenetwinkle]

I have no excuse for the length other than I just don't know when to shut the heck up. I'm so sorry. ^_^;;

Title: Transitions
Author: Serenetwinkle
Chapter: 3 of (uh...)
Rating: PG- Watanuki, you potty mouth
Word count: 5,293 (sorryPairing: Doumeki/Watanuki

Comments

[lunargeography]

Poor Doumeki. I can see why desperation to get his lover back could push him into nearly snapping -- and it would be a reasonable assumption that Watanuki was somehow involved in the disappearance of his Kimi-chan. (Loved Watanuki's reaction to that name!)

Has Watanuki seen any spirits in this world yet? I wonder if his powers are different, too....

Thanks for sharing! Long is not at all bad!

[serenetwinkle]

Yes, yes. This Doumeki is very attached to his Kimihiro. More on that in future chapters though.

Watanuki hasn't so far seen any spirits. But knowing his luck...

Thank you for reading!

[canon_4_life]

ohemgee!! Nice fic! I must say, you really manage how to set the same characters with different personality. You really did well! ^^Looking forward for next chapter ^^

[serenetwinkle]

Thanks! I tried my best to have them the same, but different (if that makes any sense). It will be a few more chapters before I can shape their real personalities though.

:-)

See you in the next one.

[ynm]

I totally agree, never apologize for a long chapter coz we love you for that! ^_^

Ran and Gingetsu cameo apperance!!! *squishes them* I love them so much, but Clover...!! Ran!! Geh...

Need more now...It's so addictive, like chocolate. Or ice-cream. Or any other nice, sweet, lovely, wonderful stuff out there that keeps you coming back for more.

[choonyeol]

Long is good, don't apologize^^

I gotta say, this doesn't turn out how I supposed it would turn out, which is a very good thing, I love suprises ^^

But I seemed to have missed chapter 2, going to seach for it right away...

[serenetwinkle]

Ah ha ha. Yes, I suppose I have been thoroughly admonished for apologizing about the length. ^_^; ;

I'm glad I could keep you surprised. It's actually something I am pretty good at. When one thing is expected, I like to tweak it just enough to keep people guessing.

Luckily, every other chapter is its own story, so it didn't interfere with this one, really.

Thanks for reading.

[kalariona]

Long. I love long chapters. I plain love this story. Thank you for updating and it being a fantastic chapter at that.

Kimi-chan. Loved the nickname.

“Aaah!!” The bespectacled teen jumped up, clutching his head as if in immense pain. “At what point in my life did waking up in a different dimension become normal?!”

Has to be my fav line.

I've friended you, btw. Please update soon? Don't be one of those people who leaves a story uncompleted! (looks around, whistling innocently as accussing stares turn in this direction!)

Rie

xx

[serenetwinkle]

I love long chapters too, the longer the better actually, LoL. I figured I would give people a heads up anyway since not everyone has a lot of time to read if they are at school, or work you slackers XD, or something like that.

Kimi-chan. I had to do it. ^_^

I liked that scene to, cause it just screamed (quite literally) 'Watanuki-spaz-moment'.

Thank you for the friending! I'm so happy to have my first LJ friend that isn't a community. He he.

Tsk tsk for the unfinished stories (I wanna read em!), but I intend to finish this one, though with my unquenchable need to expatiate upon everything it might actually be a while before it is completed.