Comments | dougan: here is a poem i wrote today

dougan

here is a poem i wrote today

Jan 05, 2004 11:10

it is a haiku. well, not technically i suppose, since it does not have a seasonal or nature theme. i've been writing haikus all day at work so far, and so i'm calling it a haiku even if it isn't, dammit.

ode to a german cannibal (haiku)

lover, come to me
i'll eat your delicious flesh
sauteed in butter

Comments 5

candelalumina January 5 2004, 10:06:37 UTC

damn right,
it's better than yours.

My 1st day of school as a pseudo haiku enamel_beans January 5 2004, 12:02:58 UTC

set ISO in half
400 Speed
T-Grain...
don't toy with me!
BUY MY BOOK, BUY MY BOOK!
vagrants/derelicts
casting naked construction workers
bordello
eyeball installations

Re: My 1st day of school as a pseudo haiku dougan January 5 2004, 12:55:04 UTC

here is a pseudo-haiku for you:
I AM PHOTO GOD.
YOU ARE A BUNCH OF LOSERS.
BUY MY FUCKING BOOK!

do you even have a camera? you can borrow mine if you don't...

Re: My 1st day of school as a pseudo haiku enamel_beans January 5 2004, 14:22:38 UTC

I have an old manual...

daisyface January 5 2004, 20:58:05 UTC

i won't be ashamed
to say i died someone's
delicious porkchop.