Fringe fic: Okay

[dotfic]

Okay
Peter/Olivia | PG | 1,300 words | Set before 3x04, "Do Shapeshifters Dream of Electric Sheep"

Written for my kissbingo table, prompt "face: forehead." Thank you to musesfool for the beta.

Comments

[writingpathways]

Ooh great descriptions of his environment, his discomfort, the drugs in his system. His Olivia, the real one in his head, telling him how to save himself -- because she's not there, and he must be saved. I want to think that Olivia sensed his danger somehow and was really there for those brief moments that he'll remember as a foggy dream.

I love forehead kissing/touching.

[dotfic]

Thank you! I liked the way the show flips expectations and Peter needs rescuing a lot, but I also think Peter's pretty strong in his own way and could save himself if he had to. Plus I had to do this: have Olivia be in his head telling him the truth, the way she has him. <3

So glad you liked!

[ulkis]

This was great. Of course Peter has a head Olivia, and it's a cool twist you'd made that the hallucination is more the real Olivia than the Olivia who is with him at the moment.

[dotfic]

Of course he does! I had to write it. I'm delighted this worked for you. ♥

[dotfic]

Poor Peter, abducted again. But he's pretty tough, and he's got an Olivia in his head to guide him. Thank you, I'm really glad you liked what I did here!

[dotfic]

Thank you so much, I'm delighted you liked the premise. I had to write Peter with an Olivia in his head. :D

[ejtheviking]

Oh Peter, your life is an illusion. *hugs him*

You have such a descriptive talent dot, I envy that!

[dotfic]

He'll figure it out eventually (I hope). I so liked the idea that his Olivia is strongly in his thoughts even though he doesn't know it because he thinks he has his Olivia, only he doesn't. Oh, Peter.

Thank you for the kind words! <3