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Yuletide Madness drabble: Borrowed (Chuck)

Jan 07, 2010 08:25

Title: Borrowed
Author: dotfic
Fandom: Chuck
Rating: G
Characters: Sarah, Ellie
W/C: 100

Written for amilyn for Yuletide Madness 2009. Originally posted here.

( None of this is truly hers, she tells herself. )

chuck fanfic, yuletide, chuck

Comments 10

chiiyo86 January 7 2010, 17:59:56 UTC

Very sweet, and the last line is a little sad.

dotfic January 26 2010, 03:09:35 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥ I'm fascinated with how the show frequently has Sarah looking in through the Bartowski window, the outsider.

halfshellvenus January 7 2010, 18:25:05 UTC

Oh, I love the bittersweetness of this, and the hints of how much Sarah wishes parts of it were real.

dotfic January 26 2010, 03:10:29 UTC

Thank you. It always so hurty how she seems to long to be part of that with Chuck and seems to feel she can't ever.

writingpathways January 7 2010, 20:37:13 UTC

Okay totally make me cry with hardly anything at all. Would be mad if I didn't like you so much :-)

dotfic January 26 2010, 03:10:51 UTC

Aw, what a lovely comment, thank you!

amchara January 8 2010, 00:15:56 UTC

Oh, Sarah. But maybe one day she'll be able to embrace it.

dotfic January 26 2010, 03:11:26 UTC

Maybe someday she'll believe she can have it. Oh, Sarah indeed.

Thank you!

torigates January 12 2010, 03:32:53 UTC

Oh, this is so heartbreaking and wonderful. Poor Sarah.

dotfic January 26 2010, 03:11:50 UTC

*smish* Thank you. Sarah breaks my heart.