[Poetry] Para sa sangkahayupan

[safranin]

To all our non-Filipino members, please pardon the Tagalog entry.  Various events today have inspired this poem, which I initially thought of as "Sari-saring kahayupan ng tao", which morphed into "Ang kahayupan ng sangkatauhan", which in turn sounded too obvious.  Anyway, since the phrase that popped into my head was in Tagalog, the rest of the

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[luckychan]

I'll still consider this for the challenge. ^__^ But do write that story with the happy ending, hehe. XD

(I'll comment on the poem later when I'm more coherent--I only had eight hours of sleep total in the past week. T_T btw, sabi ni Mr. Amadeo magsend ka raw ng poems for critique...^^)