FIC: Patterns In The Smoke

[dorkery]

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Title: Patterns In The Smoke
Length: 1,800 words
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Gay sex
Genre: Porn
Characters, Pairings: Dick Grayson/Damian Wayne
Summary: Twice is coincidence. Thrice is a pattern.

Notes: Damian Wayne is 16 MINIMUM, so he can be older if you want. This is a birthday present for my asshole friend. idgaf if this

Comments

At a loss for words.

[miyaaogiri]

This is just perfect can I simply die right now? You have the most incredible brain. Don't ever stop being so cool. You are so full of awesome, I love this so much, extremely well job. There aren't enough words in the English language to express my feeeellings.

Re: At a loss for words.

[dorkery]

HAHAHA YOU GIVE ME FAR TOO MUCH CREDIT

Also whenever people call me cool, I savour it. I am glad you enjoyed it 8)

[manriicabaeju]

DADDYBAT DADDYBAT
I CAN'T
stop being so amazing ahhhhh

I know you mentioned it was shitty BUT IT'S NOT and you shouldn't say that because omg this is so - it feels so incharacter to me that I am kind of dying?? and my heart is like BABOOM BOOM BADDA BA BA BOOM or something like that BASICALLY I AM FLUSTERED and my face is doing a billion different things right now. |8

ALSO JUST I like how even though there is obviously sex happening, you focus more on the thoughts of Damian?? (It started off as a bit of both of them, but it definitely ended as a Damian focused story, if that makes sense so ahhh idk I liked it.)

I'M RAMBLING NOW ok bye

...
this is Holo btw IN CASE YOU COULDN'T TELL but you probably could. 8(

[dorkery]

My only response: PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFTTTTTTT

I am glad you derived enjoyment from this story TBF I KIND OF HATE IT AND WANT TO RE-WRITE but it's kind of frustrating. Otherwise OMG so glad you think it's in-character. I am terrible at Damian's voice.

[manriicabaeju]

WHY WOULD YOU LAUGH AT ME. 8( MEANIE.

Well it's like that novel I wrote; sometimes you just gotta put it down for a long time and THEN go back to it because otherwise you're just UGHHHH NO I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN YOU'RE DISGUSTING or something like that?? So yes.
It seemed good to me. =w= But then I'm probably a terrible judge of these things... BUT NO I LIKED IT. ;A;

[lostbatcave]

This is too perfect. Just...So beautiful. GOD I CAN'T EVEN.<3
You did a fabulous job.(:<3

[lilycarroll]

Oh God....you save my day! Thanks, thanks, thanks!!!! Your fic is gorgeous and sexy!