Title: A Paratrooper of Their Own
Rating: PG-13 (probably too high, but just in case)
Characters/Pairing: Implied Liebgott/Webster; Luz,Christenson, and original character
Word count: 667
Summary: Private Rogers had found men attractive before. Had coveted men before. But he had never been this besotted before, never wanted something-, someone with
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In short, I really liked this <3 (The way a story is written, e.g. the use of words etc. should only be used to convey the image and the atmosphere and not distract one with descriptions that are too intricate... I felt this piece was perfectly well composed and did not distract from the image at all, which makes it quite perfect).
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I just had this random idea of another paratrooper having a crush on Web, only Lieb had got there first!
Glad you liked it :D
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It's a very nice idea. I particularly loved how Christenson and Luz did not make Web sound like a whiney bitch--I tend to get annoyed by that at times. This is much, much nicer, and it seems fitting :)
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Yeah, I am always iffy about the ones that perhaps go a wee bit overboard in a) making Web whiney and b) focusing too much on the fact he wasn't in Bastogne. I like Webster, and want to make it so others like him too!
(Sorry about late reply - am also back in full-time education, *sigh*)
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