Fic: A Paratrooper of Their Own

[doompie]

Title: A Paratrooper of Their Own
Rating: PG-13 (probably too high, but just in case)
Characters/Pairing: Implied Liebgott/Webster; Luz,Christenson, and original character
Word count: 667
Summary: Private Rogers had found men attractive before. Had coveted men before. But he had never been this besotted before, never wanted something-, someone with

Comments

[teaspoonery]

I'd say this was more sweet than cracky, to be honest... Which is perfectly fine because I wanted to read either sweet or crack tonight (which is the first evening in ages I've actually some time to do some readong, thank God). This is exactly why I love the pairing. There's room for humour and fluff, and yet Lieb and Web are so OTP no one gets to get between them.

In short, I really liked this <3 (The way a story is written, e.g. the use of words etc. should only be used to convey the image and the atmosphere and not distract one with descriptions that are too intricate... I felt this piece was perfectly well composed and did not distract from the image at all, which makes it quite perfect).

[doompie]

Oh wow, thank you so much; and especially coming from a fantastic writer such as you (have pretty much trawled through all your fics numerous times!)

I just had this random idea of another paratrooper having a crush on Web, only Lieb had got there first!

Glad you liked it :D

[teaspoonery]

I know, you left a massive amount of comments a while back (which I was extremely flattered by a while back). I wouldn't dub myself a fantastic writer though, and certainly not with the amount I've been writing lately (aka not at all, or at least nothing school-related).

It's a very nice idea. I particularly loved how Christenson and Luz did not make Web sound like a whiney bitch--I tend to get annoyed by that at times. This is much, much nicer, and it seems fitting :)

[doompie]

Well then, one of the better writers I have come across! I love the variety of stories you have written, not just all the same 'idea'.

Yeah, I am always iffy about the ones that perhaps go a wee bit overboard in a) making Web whiney and b) focusing too much on the fact he wasn't in Bastogne. I like Webster, and want to make it so others like him too!

(Sorry about late reply - am also back in full-time education, *sigh*)

[sra_danvers]

I was expecting Liebgott to tell them something, and not nice ^^ I loved this!

[doompie]

Thank you! Glad you liked it :D