Deathstars: Malice On My Mind

[doomedloves]

Title: Malice On My Mind
Author: doomedloves
Beta: m_artsa
Fandom: Deathstars
Pairing: Cat Casino/Whiplasher Bernadotte
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Slash, fluff, drama
Words: 480
Summary: Cat is upset and smoking. Whip stares.
A/N: m_artsa gave me a challenge - use words muscle, night and lock and the dialogue "We checked under the coffee table and under the couch but still can't

Comments

[fruityahren]

This was really cute! I loved the details of how Cat needs cigarettes and how they travel through his body, ect.

I just really want what happens on that couch!

[gutterfl0wer]

Goddamn I love the two of them, they're so sexy and sweet together. Lovely fic :)

[egoemopunk]

aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww<3

you do know that now you got to write one part were they beat up Skinny, and one part with couch action, right? ;D

i really liked this, it was cute, good description, and easy to read. Cat being obsessed by nicotine is so cute, and i can really connect with that - sadly >_> :P

Boots that looked awkward on him because he was so petite and the boots were huge.
i like this part much, 'cause it shows how tiny Kitten really is <3

[niela_xxx]

I'm so tird I barely keep my eyes open, but you should know I read this and it was so nice. I wanted to mention everything egoemopunk did, since we have linked brains and apparently I'd just repeat her. I;ll just throw a part of IM convo here:
(15:44:05) Opheliac.: *grins* it's a cuuute story.
(15:44:08) Opheliac.: but too short.
(15:44:18) Opheliac.: there is just missing something.
(15:44:22) Opheliac.: preferably the sex part.

[egoemopunk]

i love you <333

[niela_xxx]

I love you too! <3

[ninon_beart]

Nice oneshot (:

Whip/Cat ftw!!! <3