fanfiction || knightian uncertainty [khr], 1/1

Apr 27, 2011 17:54

Title: Knightian Uncertainty
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Rating/Warnings: T+~M
Characters/Pairings: Yamamoto, Gokudera, other khr cast (8059)
Word Count: 5,528
Disclaimer: Katekyo Hitman Reborn! and all affiliated characters and settings are the creative property of Akira Amano, Shueisha, Weekly Shounen Jump, and any other companies holding ( Read more... )

*fandom: khr, fanfiction

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doomcake April 28 2011, 04:35:16 UTC
OHGOD HEART IS GOING TO BREAK

YOU PROBABLY FELT THAT WAY because when I started writing this story, it was not going to go well, or end well, or generally be a feel-good kind of story haha;;;; SO MAYBE SOME OF THAT SENTIMENT STILL REMAINS IN THE WRITING *hides.*

asdflkajsdfa;;;; AAAA I am so glad you like this! ;w;/ asdlkf It makes my day to get feedback from you, because I adore your writing sfm you have no ideaaaaa. ;////; Thank you so much, bby!! ♥

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doomcake April 28 2011, 04:37:08 UTC
Eeee, thank you for reading!! ♥ I'm so glad you enjoyed this! \o/

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thisistony April 28 2011, 02:16:28 UTC
:D I haven't been reading much KHR lately, but when I saw that YOU wrote it, I decided to give it a shot anyway.

And you came right through with something awesome. Thank you much for writing this :D

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doomcake April 28 2011, 04:43:40 UTC
asldkfjasdf AAAAA th-thank you so much bby! ;A;!! I haven't seen you around the fandom for aaaaages (nnnnn I miss your writing so much!), so I'm really flattered you read this anyway! ♥ ♥ ♥ Again, thank you!!

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thisistony April 28 2011, 04:48:45 UTC
Whoa, what? You must be mistaken, I only wrote weird shit, LOL, glad to hear you say something like that, tho.

I haven't been in fandom in aaaaages, but I recently caught up on all of my manga. :D (The biggest problem is that I read OP while in the KHR fandom and hogod, OP)

I couldn't resist reading something by you~~~ That said, I should probably see what you've written while I've been gone ;)

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doomcake April 28 2011, 04:58:27 UTC
No, I'm not mistaken!! I love weird/brain-breaky stuff, you have no idea ;A;!! I just suck at commenting, is all, AND FOR THAT, I APOLOGIZE /;w;\

Ahahaha omg, I'm also reading OP (got into it after I was already well into KHR, and tbh THE OP MANGA IS PROBABLY MY FAVORITE ONGOING SERIES RIGHT NOW, aside from maybe DGM;;;), so I know how you feel!! I actually read more OP fic than I do KHR fic, though I can't seem to stop writing KHR hahaha;;;

asldkfjasdf ahaha you probably didn't miss much, I promise!! I'm super-slow at writing & updating anything, so uh. |D Not much to show of late, orz!!

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dtn April 28 2011, 02:54:44 UTC
I loved reading this when I had gone through the anthology. FOR LIKE SOME REASON, I LIKE READING FICS WHEN ONE OF THEM IS SUPPOSE TO GET MARRIED >_O And like, they're so having sex behind corners. Ahahahhaha I'm so cheesy. I kind of thought it was cute Gisella ended up liking the company of both of them too.

TL;DR ME LIKEY THIS LONG TIME.

/mem'd :'D this is why i don't comment, I sound like an idiot XD

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doomcake April 28 2011, 04:48:15 UTC
asdlkfjasdf;;; Aaaa thank you so much!! AHAHA originally Gokudera was going to go through with the marriage, and it was gonna get ugly because he & Yamamoto weren't going to stop sexing/seeing each other anyway & Gisella wasn't going to turn out QUITE that nice;;;; BUT I DIDN'T HAVE THE HEART TO DO THAT so;;; I am glad you like how this turned out! ;w;/♥

alskdfj bawww you don't sound like an idiot, bby! I'm usually the one worrying how stupid-sounding I am in my own comments, orz;; SO THANK YOU for commenting anyway, because it totally made my day that you enjoyed this! :'D

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dtn April 28 2011, 05:44:26 UTC
THHHHHHOOOUGH I am VERY intrigued by that concept too, I'm glad you went this route! Mainly just because it's to more of a happy ending, and you end up liking Gisella too. I laughed when she followed them into the closet. Classy~ I would hate to imagine if she was one to explode with rage or something lol what.

daw I'm glad ♥ I sometimes feel very small and lame when commenting on awesome fics because I don't know what to say since I'm not a writer ;__; I think I may repeat myself and what not XD THANK YOU FOR SHARING~~ *__*

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doomcake April 28 2011, 07:05:41 UTC
I liked it, too! It was just... a lot to tackle, especially for a fic being written as a part of an anthology. ;A; I have half a mind to try writing the general idea out anyway, but haha I suck at writing anything nowadays, orz. ;A;

Haha, you should never feel small & lame while commenting on fics! Any writer will tell you that if nobody comments, they usually think it means their fic/s suck/s ;n; so any comment, no matter how small the commenter thinks it is, is always so appreciated!! ♥♥♥ AND I ALSO REPEAT MYSELF by saying Thank You!! like a million times, but I really do mean it! ;A;/ Thank you again, bby!!

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beruichi April 28 2011, 04:34:45 UTC
Beautiful. Just, beautiful. :')

I'm never really one for original characters, but if they're all awesome like your Gisella, I say, bring 'em here! XD
"Apparently she told her father that she refused to be a political pawn. Called into question his sense of morality and everything-she insisted that she has someone else she’d rather pursue on her own."
Take that, you patriarchal, power-hungry bastards! \(・`Д´・;)

And Tsuna's as awesome as usual. Why aren't there more Tsunas in this world. I'd like one, please. |D

Btw, writing this in Yama's POV was brilliant. Because it's easier to read what's in Dera's mind than in Yama's. For me, at least. So it's nice to see what goes through the head of our beloved baseball idiot. ♥

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doomcake April 28 2011, 04:54:10 UTC
asdflkj aaaaa Thank you so much!! ;///;

I too am not usually one for OCs (and I won't lie; I was a little worried about how Gisella would sound, because I didn't want to write an air-headed bimbo fangirl, or a bitch, or generally someone unrealistic--so I'm so glad she didn't come off that way!), so your feedback on Gisella totally made my day! ;A;!!

I *adore* Tsuna mostly in those moments where he steps up & mans up & does AWESOME THINGS... but not so much when he's being a wimp ahahaha!! I too would love to see more of him, especially when he's worrying about his friends (I think it always brings out the best in him)! :D

Eeee, I'm glad Yamamoto's POV worked well! I've come to this point in fandom where I find him the easiest to write, idk why, so I'm glad I'm not being delusional! HAHA;;; Again, thank you so much for all the kind words/feedback!! ♥ I'm so glad you enjoyed this, omg. ;w;b

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