fanfiction || Going Home [KHR], 1/1 (one-shot)

Sep 29, 2008 02:42

Title: 02 - Going Home (and I just can't make it all alone) // ♪ rock you like a hurricane mix, track two (@ 30_ballads)
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Rating/Warnings: M. Violence, language, brutality, though not graphic.
Genre: drama, h/c (haha, go figure |D), gen. (No, really! Sh-Shush!)
Word Count: 7,155 (this draft)
Character: Hayato “Smokin' Bomb” ( Read more... )

-fic challenge: 30_ballads, *fandom: khr, hurricane mix, fanfiction, feedback please, one-shot

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doomcake September 29 2008, 18:18:36 UTC
8DDD;; I'm sorry it took me so long to finish!

ikindawasmeantodino Dx
AND I BEAT HIM UP BECAUSE-- oh, I don't know. He gets beat up in the manga a lot, too! >_>

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :DD Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and make me feel all warm & fuzzy~~! ♥!!

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labymiro September 29 2008, 19:28:52 UTC
Ooh you write KHR! as well! I read your Insurgence arc! XDD Very painful and perfect language as usual... I had to wince several times reading it but the ending was so nice.

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doomcake September 29 2008, 22:55:58 UTC
Whoa, small small world! 8D;; Hooray for more Bleach-KHR! dual fans! :D

^^;; Thank you so much for the feedback (especially on the ending, because HAHA um, I kinda rushed it so I could go on to bed) - I'm really glad you enjoyed it! ♥~!

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bunniblu September 29 2008, 20:26:24 UTC
God, I love how bad ass your Gokudera always is :D
I swear he is so the shit in this fic, The epitome of just so fucking cool.
love love lurv this fic ♥

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doomcake September 29 2008, 22:57:33 UTC
*is all flattered* I'm glad you enjoy my vision of Gokudera! I can't help but see him as totally bad ass in the manga at times, haha - really glad it came through here as well! |DDD;;

♥~! Thank you so much!! :D

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coconabanana September 29 2008, 23:35:49 UTC
I'm crying! UWAHH... This is so beautiful! And the people Gokudera care about the most! Tsuna (obviously), Yamamoto ('his best friend'), Haru (aww... I luv 5986), Lambo (isn't that sweet?), Bianchi and Uri!
This ìs too much for me to handle!
*memmed*

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doomcake September 29 2008, 23:56:03 UTC
:D I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ♥~! Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment on it; I can't tell you how much I appreciate it!!!

HEE~ and omfg I love 5986. LOVE it. 8D If I were inclined to write KHR romance, that would be my pairing of choice.

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coconabanana September 30 2008, 01:32:24 UTC
Comments/reviews are writer's best friends!!
5986 is my OTP!! XDD I've written loads of fanfics about them. One of them was about how Gokudera showed Haru his piano playing. (that's why the part with the piano playing in your story reminded me of mine)
It feels so good to meet another 5986 fan. YAY!

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doomcake September 30 2008, 03:05:30 UTC
AGREED. :)

Haha, I don't usually do OTPs (me, I'm a gen girl~ 8D and I tend to fall in love with any pairing that's explained well enough), but if I had one for KHR? 5986 would probably be a good candidate for it. Hee~~ ♥!

You do know about the GokuHaru comm, yes??? 8D Lots more 5986 fans - apparently, we're not alone! :DDDD

I-I need GokuHaru icons, hahaha.

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glockdown September 30 2008, 01:35:12 UTC
Ah, despite all the grisly bits to begin with, it's such a lovely, feel-good sort of fic, what with gen being a dying breed in this fandom. 8D Thanks for the fuzzies.

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doomcake September 30 2008, 03:14:05 UTC
Gen is a dying breed in any fandom, but I do what I can. xDD;;

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad that this wasn't too depressing; it could easily have gone down that direction, but I like fuzzy endings once in a while m'self. |DDD;;

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