Unintended [Chapter 7A/10]

[donut95]

Title: Unintended [Chapter 7A/10]

Characters/Subjects: Kris & Adam, American Idol S8 and post American Idol

Word Count: Approx. 45,000 for entire story of 10 Chapters.

Rating: IDK! R perhaps.

Warning: Violence, rape and related triggers.

Disclaimer: 100% fiction. Everything is as fake as plastic surgery! I owned nothing.

Beta: NONE! All mistakes are

Comments

[wikken]

[donut95]

Thanks for reading and commenting! Really appreciate it.

But yeah, Brad was a little heartless here but i wanted to write it in a way to show that he really cared for Adam. As for Adam, no ... i didnt mean to make him so cruel. He was facing a lot of stress from all corners. It was difficult for me to write this part but had to make it sound a lil cruel to Kris cause indeed, his situation is making it very hard for Adam to deal.

[prohibiton_sign]

for the record, I think your English is excellent! Just read up on this story and, girl, you are breaking my heart here...

I know Kris needs to get his act together but for Brad to confront him like that and leave him alone....maybe not the best idea. Adam needs to get his ass back from NYC and really sit down and talk to his bb. Kris is probably confused as to why Adam is suddenly turning on him with anger....tho, it's understandable with the stress and the probably surpressed anger he still feels towards Gokey and everything that's happened to fuck up their happy life.

Wow....post more pleas....I....need....more....;)

[donut95]

Wow! Thanks for your comment. I really appreciate it. Yea, English is not my first language but I can write better than i can speak cause when i write, i can still check up on dictionary and grammar pointers on the internet. reading helps me to improve and writing Kradam fics help too, haha.

I think at this point of the story, the person that really need to get his act together is Kris. when i was writing this, i kind of pity Adam's situation.

[prohibiton_sign]

I know Kris needs to get his act together and understand Adam's anger, just....poor bb Kris lol *wants to cuddle both*

[embaka]

I'm not liking Brad much at this point. Not Adam either, but I know it must be hard loving someone who is just wasting away. Good chapter, even if I don't like the way things went, it definitely seems realistic for the story.

[donut95]

Thanks for your comments. I agree, I think the Brad I wrote here is being a lil cruel but wanted to show how much he cared for Adam. And yes, like you said it, I have to make it realistic, especially for Adam. Everyone has got their boundaries and I guess at this point of the story, Adam really have had enough ...he is choking on stress!

Sorry if i made Adam a lil cruel here to Kris. But I hope I can make it better soon.

Thanks for reading :)

[cc70]

OMG! I can't believe Adam and Brad! Kris's healing can not be done on THEIR timetable. If Adam can't handle this then that's on him not Kris.
Kris needs help and not the kind Brad and Adam are dishing out right now their just making him feel worse about himself not better.

I'm sure you can't tell but I'm loving this. lol

[cc70]

Oh, One more thing...I need the next part like NOW! :D

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second that!

[pinkeurogirl]

brad needs to butt out! adam quite harsh here but it has been building for a while. they need help