Comments | donteatacowman: Phantasm: A Ghost Story (Danny Phantom, K+)

donteatacowman

Phantasm: A Ghost Story (Danny Phantom, K+)

Sep 06, 2009 18:49

Disclaimer: I do not own "Danny Phantom" or anything related.

A/N: An AU. My first foray into the DP fandom. Hope you enjoy.

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"On behalf of the school, my students, and myself, thank you for letting us tour your home, Mr. and Mrs. Fenton," Mr. Lancer said to the two scientists as high schoolers swarmed into the laboratory in the basement of Fenton ( Read more... )

death, danny phantom, au, fanfiction, angst, serious, origins, ghosts

Comments 5

Danny Phantom Fanfiction Awesomeness edgarsgirl September 16 2009, 19:10:28 UTC

Whoa, dead! I was not expecting that! That was so cool! I write some Danny Phantom fanfiction myself. Except mine's all posted on www.fanfiction.net/~frodo01228. I recently started up here on LiveJournal too, and I'm planning to use this journal as my Fanfiction journal.

Re: Danny Phantom Fanfiction Awesomeness donteatacowman September 16 2009, 21:04:42 UTC

Thanks for the review!

quettalinde October 2 2009, 07:12:06 UTC

I know I'm late in reviewing, but I don't like this any less as a result. I really like how you twisted the "revelation at FentonWorks" trope-and the "Danny's really completely dead" trope as well. I'll confess to kind of rolling my eyes at the beginning, but I perked up when I got to Dash's part. Nice work making him the catalyst of it all. And then Danny's body being there, and him having his business complete and just dissolving … Creepy, and I would not want to be in that basement right then.

Also, Lancer's language fail? Made of awesome. XD

donteatacowman October 2 2009, 23:07:19 UTC

>I'll confess to kind of rolling my eyes at the beginning

*cheesy grin*

Thank you very much! (This was actually just born of one of my wish-fulfillment fanfic fantasies I make up to pass the time and, hey-whadddya-know, it worked. So this is one of my favorites out of what I've written.)

>Also, Lancer's language fail? Made of awesome. XD

:D Thx, my homeboy.

quettalinde October 4 2009, 07:03:40 UTC

This was actually just born of one of my wish-fulfillment fanfic fantasies I make up to pass the time

I suspect a lot of fanwriters start writing fic due to wish-fulfillment. ;) There are worse ways to get started. Nothing wrong with it at all.