Kinda Like a One-Hit Wonder for slutrick ficathon.

Sep 13, 2007 16:07

Title: Kinda Like a One-Hit Wonder
Author: becomingblurred
Pairing: Complicated Maja/Patrick, Patrick/Travis
Word Count: 2458
Rating: PG
Summary: Sometimes you find the bump that makes you trip and fall in love. And most of the time it has the worst timing.
Disclaimer: I don't own Fall Out Boy, The Sounds, or Gym Class Heroes
Author’s Note: This is for megyal for ( Read more... )

ficathon, patrick/travis, fueled by ramen, patrick/maja

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megyal September 15 2007, 21:00:48 UTC
OK SO I'M JUST GONNA MAKE MY FIRST COMMENT BECAUSE THIS IS MINE.

*rushes to read*

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megyal September 15 2007, 21:10:13 UTC
*hugs*

This was...oh man. It had a lot of painful, beautiful, funny moments. I really love the angst in it. And there are so many lines that I love!

no one can be just sweet to each other anymore. You’re either fucking or you fucking hate each other. There’s no in-between. That's probably my favourite, because its true.

You go off with tall boys that make you smile.
I love that line, it sounds like a song lyric.

I’m going to be attacked by the Munchkins
I laughed out loud at that! It sounded just like something he would say.

She drew hearts and stars on Patrick back, wondering how long she could keep it up until he got annoyed.
Oh man, my heart just went 'awwwwwwwww'.

Thank you so much Donner. You took the pairings I wanted and really did an excellent job with them. *HUGS*

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becomingblurred September 15 2007, 23:06:30 UTC
*hugs back* I'm so fucking glad you like this <3 I had literally three different drafts of this and I kinda went with the one that I felt I could relate with more. I guess I picked the right one :)

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musictoyourlips September 16 2007, 04:24:51 UTC
Um, okay, this is AMAZING. I love the relationship between Patrick and Maja, and the tiny bit you showed of Patrick and Travie's relationship. GUH. Just. So great.

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becomingblurred September 16 2007, 04:41:39 UTC
:O <3 Thank you so much!

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kookykay September 16 2007, 11:00:55 UTC
You might have made me reconsider whether Patrick/Pete are my OTP.

o_O

Great job on the fic though, I liked all the personal characteristics you gave to them so that they didn't seem like one-sided characters.

Definitely adding this to my memories :D

Damnit, I need to have a Patrick/Travis icon or at least a Patrick/Maja icon. Right now. STAT.

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becomingblurred September 16 2007, 17:55:54 UTC
O_O Whoa. Really? Damn. Thank you so much for reading <3

(I need to find some, too D: I hope after this tour there'll be more resurfacing on the Patrick/Travis front)

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thesleepless84 September 16 2007, 14:11:35 UTC
Hey there!

My heart went 'aslpode from the awesome. Srsrly. I ♥ all of it.

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becomingblurred September 16 2007, 17:56:10 UTC
<3 Thank you so much :O

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once_too_many September 30 2007, 06:27:57 UTC
Ah, so sweet! This is great, I can't stop smiling. Not in that Oh My God porn way. But that seeing puppies, giving your best friend a flower, kisses on the cheek kind of way. I love it. : )

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becomingblurred September 30 2007, 20:21:33 UTC
Thank you so much <3 That always is a good smile. Sometimes better than OMGPORN! ones.

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