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shocolate April 30 2006, 13:59:03 UTC
She might be a nurse and a nun, but she was also a woman and a cat...

That is a classic line.

"I wonder," she purred, "do you feel you're clean enough or are you in need of some grooming?"

That is wonderfully kinky.

There was a huge Ten/TARDIS vibe, wasn't there?

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donnaimmaculata April 30 2006, 14:05:30 UTC
Thank you very much. I'm quite fond of the Kinky!KittyGrooming myself...

Even Sarah Jane and Rose realised that the Doctor really likes his ship very, very much. You know how some people make sure to have sex in every room in their home? The Doctor makes sure to have sex with every room in his home.

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shocolate April 30 2006, 14:07:54 UTC
The Doctor makes sure to have sex with every room in his home.

ANd his home is a lot bigger on the inside than the outside - I have no idea how to turn that porny - but men have a thing about size.....

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donnaimmaculata April 30 2006, 14:13:22 UTC
"My TARDIS is bigger than yours" and all that.

TARDIS envy.

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remey April 30 2006, 14:19:23 UTC
oh FUN. nicely done.
zomg i rhymed. but really, i laughed my arse off.

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donnaimmaculata April 30 2006, 14:22:25 UTC
Thank you very much. I'm happy to entertain :-)

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pbristow April 30 2006, 14:51:22 UTC
Eek! Major grammatical problem is driving me nuts, especially as you've used it more than once:

"the Face's of Boe Millenia"

"the Face's of Boe Face"

We *do not* insert the posessive apostrophe-s into the middle of the nounal phrase that identifies the posessor. Never, never, never! So it's:

"the Face of Boe's Millenia"

and:

"the Face of Boe's Face"

[NODS FIRMLY]

Apart from that.... Mrrrrrrooowww!!! =;o}

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donnaimmaculata April 30 2006, 14:56:13 UTC
Ah, all right, I'll fix it as not to drive you nuts any longer.

Glad you liked it despite that!

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jadekirk September 1 2006, 18:30:43 UTC
Oooh, lovely fic!! *grins*

*My fingers insist on typing "Filch", and then weird images of Barty Crouch Jr., detentions, and whipping present themselves. Hm, Doctor/Barty/Filch, anyone?

I can't help you with the Filch bit but I have written a few 10th Doctor/Barty Jr fics. *blushes*

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donnaimmaculata September 5 2006, 07:23:42 UTC
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10th Doctor/Barty Jr. sounds quite delicious. Any chance for a link?

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jadekirk September 5 2006, 09:10:46 UTC
Yeah. Here's the link to the first one in the series. ‘Spanking Barty’ (PG13)
. (The links to the next part are at the bottom of the page and some are NC17) Reviews are sacred. Hope you enjoy.

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donnaimmaculata September 5 2006, 16:11:28 UTC
Thanks a lot. I'll let you know when I read them. *saves link*

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badplanmobile March 15 2008, 04:08:33 UTC
Wonderfully, bizarrely hot. I like.
The epilogue is so cracky it hurts.

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donnaimmaculata March 17 2008, 10:13:03 UTC
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it - and thanks for commenting so long after it's been posted. That is always a very pleasant surprise :-)

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