Fic: That Brings My Whole World to a Stop

[lizook12]

Title: That Brings My Whole World to a Stop
Category: Suits
Word Count: 570
Rating: T
Spoilers: None, set in future
A/N: This is the fastest I've written something in awhile; hopefully that's not a bad thing. Title taken from Kenny Chesney's Live A Little.
Summary: Either way, it’s foreign to him, having control wrenched from his hands.

Comments

[bluberrykisses]

*flails*
And I never really pictured them as the kissing in the rain but ♥
That was so lovely. The little details like how she had the appeal and the wine made it all the better. Also, his last line made me grin. I'm just throwing it out there but this could definitely be continued.....

[lizook12]

*flails with you*
It makes me so happy to hear that the details really made this come to life.

I'll never completely rule out a continuation or sequel, but this is it for now ;)

Thanks again for reading and commenting ♥

[bristow1941]

Awwww! I love Harvey unable to deal with defeat and Donna rescuing him.

[lizook12]

Yay, I'm glad the premise worked for you and that you enjoyed it :)

Thanks for reading!

[quisinart4]

I love how she just knows exactly what he needs. The way you wrote his panic was so raw, because I think it's so rare we see him panic, he's always so in control. Great scene!!! :) Thank you as always for these, they make my night!

[lizook12]

It's so good to see that his panic felt frantic and real. Thanks so much for the thoughtful comments ♥

[phrenitis]

It terrifies him.

Oh Harvey. <3 That was a nice change of pace to see - that moment where he's caught of guard. Lovely!

[lizook12]

I'm glad the change of context worked - I was a little concerned that it might take him a little out of character so it's nice to hear that it didn't.

Thanks again for reading and leaving such awesome comments. ♥