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[Fic] [FMA] Won't Take, Won't Have

Mar 17, 2008 13:44

Title: Won't Take, Won't Have
Author: domlandbubbles
Characters: Lan Fan, chapter 54 spoiler
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2250-ish
Summary: Lan Fan returns to Amestris to find Ling. She does.
For: 30_nights Theme #I'll figure it out later.
Notes: The answer to Lan Fan's question is here. Oh, god. This story has been sitting in my writing folder for, what, a year. I hope it's ( Read more... )

fma, fic

Comments 39

notaguy April 2 2008, 04:02:07 UTC

Holy crap. I don't even know what to say but that was so good. Your voice for Lan Fan is just perfect. And I think I actually teared up at the end. Wow, just, wow.

haruhiism April 2 2008, 04:02:49 UTC

ROFL, forgot I was in an rp journal. STILL, AWESOME.

domlandbubbles April 2 2008, 08:35:15 UTC

Thanks!

mithluin April 3 2008, 21:56:43 UTC

Great! I really love her trembling resolve, and how most of the conversation happens without her seeing him. The last sentence is perfect.

domlandbubbles April 5 2008, 09:33:50 UTC

Thanks!

static_roses April 5 2008, 04:15:58 UTC

Eeee! I really enjoyed that, great job! Fandom needs more Ling/Fan

domlandbubbles April 5 2008, 09:34:35 UTC

Thanks!

OMG! Your icon! It's so cute!

static_roses April 5 2008, 14:14:20 UTC

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Okay that anon comment was me, oops. DX

cornerofmadness May 7 2008, 15:16:29 UTC

I'm finally at long last catching up. THis was both creepy and wonderful. I really felt for Ran Fan and the ending was just beautiful.

domlandbubbles May 8 2008, 09:00:34 UTC

Thank you!

P.S. Great icon!

cornerofmadness May 8 2008, 13:59:36 UTC

thanks. I thought it was fun

mindy_mousie September 13 2009, 14:16:07 UTC

I also agree that it's difficult to find LingFan stories that keep *both* of them in complete character.

And the ending blew me away. Oh man. :) I got butterflies! XD

domlandbubbles September 14 2009, 10:35:42 UTC

Thanks!

I'm glad the ending works!