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[Fic] [FMA] Won't Take, Won't Have

Mar 17, 2008 13:44

Title: Won't Take, Won't Have
Author: domlandbubbles
Characters: Lan Fan, chapter 54 spoiler
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2250-ish
Summary: Lan Fan returns to Amestris to find Ling. She does.
For: 30_nights Theme #I'll figure it out later.
Notes: The answer to Lan Fan's question is here. Oh, god. This story has been sitting in my writing folder for, what, a year. I hope it's ( Read more... )

fma, fic

Comments 39

pictash March 18 2008, 02:52:48 UTC

...*squeal!*

I'm not gonna be one of those crazy fangirls who asks for a sequel but, DUDE, that was AWESOME. Probably on the epic scale. LingFan... *gets plot bunny and must leave*

domlandbubbles March 18 2008, 10:04:23 UTC

Yay! Thanks.

There might be a sequel, I don't know. I still have a bunch of prompts to go for the challenge.

Glad you liked it!

scathachdhu March 18 2008, 03:07:45 UTC

Wow, this was gorgeous; you can really feel the raw emotion beneath her restraint. Fic about the two of them is rare, and how nice to find something this well done. Thanks for sharing this.

domlandbubbles March 18 2008, 10:07:15 UTC

Thanks!

scathachdhu October 20 2011, 00:18:22 UTC

I know you wrote this way back in 2008, but I would absolutely love a sequel. This was so well written and in character that it just begs to have one. Plus with that ending, I'm dying to see what happens next. I feel like it's a bit of a cliff hanger. I'd be really interested to see the aftermath.

domlandbubbles October 23 2011, 08:58:58 UTC

Thanks! I've been thinking of a sequel, but it's hard to get it down in writing. But it was really nice to get your comment even though this story is rather old, so thank you!

anat_astarte March 18 2008, 03:32:13 UTC

Mmmm yes..I agree, I also love the raw emotion beneath her restraint, and I love that Greed taps into it the way that he does well. <3 *adds to mems*

domlandbubbles March 18 2008, 10:10:13 UTC

Yay! Thanks!

dreamer1789 March 18 2008, 08:27:40 UTC

That was amazing! XD The intensity of it all - such insight into everything Lan Fan would go through. Greed was great in this too. Love how he plays them both, but sticks to the truth. ^^

domlandbubbles March 18 2008, 10:10:58 UTC

Thanks!

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domlandbubbles March 19 2008, 05:47:14 UTC

DRAAAAAAAWWWWW!!!! PLEEEEEEASE!!!!

I still have the print of your Lan Fan from last year. It makes me happy!

Hey, are you going to Kawaii kon this year?

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domlandbubbles March 20 2008, 09:02:57 UTC

OMG. Ling Melody icon so cute!

You're not coming to Hawaii? Curses! It really is a pain to get out here, so yes! Some day!

~sending good thoughts to your fingers~