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joey_wheeler in domino_effect

June Someteenth

Aug 03, 2009 11:10

[The Players: serenityw, joey_wheeler
The Scene: Just an evening together. Backdated to Wednesday, June 17th, 2009]"Here ( Read more... )

joey/serenity, serenity, joey

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tragic_elegance August 3 2009, 17:31:16 UTC

That is the best mustard sound ever.

>A challenging smirk, one eyebrow raised toward his hairline in challenge, was her prompt: Your move.
I LMAOed. We're not so far away from the series, now are we? XD

Also, are you going to the Jersey shore? Or Philadelphia for cheesesteaks?

OOC seto_kaiba_ August 5 2009, 15:33:37 UTC

I know that it's *really* hard writing action/fight scenes with the right mix of enough description to be understandable but not too much that makes the reader glaze over and start skimming. You guys did a great job!

I love the easy closeness between the two of them, and the teasing always makes me grin. Nice log, thanks for the smile both of you : )