[Players:
duke_devlin,
tristan_taylor_, and Téa Gardener in her final appearance.]
[Scene: Three people walk into a bar. One ducks. Haha, get it? One ducks-- oh, all right. Actually, one leaves, one gets ridiculously awkward, the other shows off copious pet pictures, and everyone enjoys the evening off. Backdated to: Thursday, July 26, 2007]Tristan stretched, humping his
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Also, Leah/Duke, the narrative here was really smooth. That goes for the piece overall, but I see a big difference in this and some of your much earlier writing.
The last moments were both awkward and real and the settling ending was very affirming of their friendship.
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Anyway... I love this log; it's such a good 'summing up' of links-- I kept thinking that Duke and Tristan were about to start up a diagram on a bar-napkin showing how The 50 Real People In NYC knew everybody, you know, with lines connecting each to each and so forth. ^__^ Really nicely done, and just enough to spark a little paranoia on certain people's parts.
**sigh** Gonna miss Téa.
PET PHOTOS! No, I will not laugh-- okay, well, yes I will. That was just cute in an 'Awwwwwww' kind of way.
Anyway-- good log. And somebody needs to get Tristan a shirt that says "NOOOOOOOOO SKATES! Capes are OK, though" on the back.
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