Eulogy

[domfangirlfic]

Title: Eulogy
Author: domfangirl
Starring: Lincoln and Gretchen (mentions of Self, Mahone, T-Bag, Sara, Michael, LJ & Sofia)
Category: One-shot
Rating: R (lots of bad thoughts and language)
Summary: Lincoln contemplates his desire for Gretchen.
Author’s Notes: Spoilers for Seasons 3 and 4, dialogue lifted from various episodes.

The reaches opened before us

Comments

[heliokleia]

"...fuck first, kill second..." - hahaha... that's it. My fav line. Definitely!^^
As I read your comment yesterday to tokenblkgirl's wonderful lil snippet, I was thinking:'o yeah, more of it, pwz!' - and you just did it! :O) :O)

Thank you so much, sweetheart, for Lincoln's secretly thoughs about Gretchen, his sworn enemy & his secret lust... *squee*
Gorgeous, simply gorgeous. I love every single tempting word.^^
Also thankx because of the comparison between Gretchen and Sofia. I still liked Sofia, but our Gretchen plays in a much higher league...
*nods*

And now, after the writers teased us with such a hawt scene, Gretchen (Jodi) waves 'bye' and leaves the show! ARRGHH!!
*stomps*
That's not fair!!
The more's your fabulous story soothing my frustrated mind, my dear one, so, thank you again for writing and sharing it with us.
It was a great pleasure to read.
*huggles*

Oh, and not to forget: HAPPY NEW YEAR to you, my Dear!!

[badboy_fangirl]

Do you see a pattern--every woman Linc has chemistry with (or even scenes with) gets written out. It's very irritating.

I'm glad you liked it. I'm thinking there will be a follow up...

Happy New Year to you, too!

[spektrikulma]

Omg, this was so good. There was this unexplainable athmospere around this fic. Or I don`t know, those kind of vibes I got from the text. You described their twisted relationship so well, the tension between those two almost killed me! This really is an interesting pairing, episode 14 was a Goods gift for fan fiction writers, haha. =D The bases are just great to start building their relationship and to lift it up to another, upper, level. Even though it can`t obviously end well. But, whatever, angst rules. =D

[spektrikulma]

.. and lol, what am I talking about, I meant episode 16.

[badboy_fangirl]

I've liked Linc and Gretchen since the beginning (when she was still Susan) but then we thought she chopped off Sara's head, so I couldn't really believe he'd have sex with her. Now I can. :D

I'm glad you liked this so much you left such a nice comment! You're English may not be perfect, but I loved every word! :D

I agree that they can never ride off into the sunset together, but they could have a very hot affair! :D

[rosie_spleen]

Of course I am interested in this. Now.

I think I miss out on some really good reads by you, Candy - not intentionally, just because we oft read and write such different things...but God, for some reason Linc & Gretch are hot in the LiveJournal at the moment, and I LOVE so much about this:

Let me list the ways:

1. he will fuck her then kill her
2. she is a cat in heat
3. he knew he's DO her as soon as he'd seen her. Grrrr.
4. he's a sick, sick bastard LOL
5. she'd have no underwear on and he'd be f**king her in 5 seconds not flat.

Yeah. I likey. A lot. Sorry to have missed this, but thanks for the redirect. I see you've just posted a m/c follow up from Gretchen's POV. I look forward to reading that.

[badboy_fangirl]

Yay! You like it, I'm so glad. Just FYI, the other piece is definitely a night-time read. *g*

I have so many friends who I adore who write and love the M/S stuff so much, and I'm just so over it; and in juxtaposition, most of my M/S friends can only read so much of Lincoln before they are sick to death of it, so yes we have a bit of impasse when it comes to sharing reading/writing interests. But I appreciate it when you stop by anyway!

Maybe you'll be so inspired to write your own little L/G ficlet... :D

[abvj]

I really liked this. You're insight to Lincoln was spot-on (as always) and the dynamic you've created here was perfect. More so than the Linc/Gretchen aspects -- which I will admit I've been loving lately -- I love the subtle look into Lincoln and how the past several months have taken such a toll on him. The idea always was that Linc was never a killer (sans the flashback I choose to believe does not exist) and now the events have pushed him into being the one thing he never wanted to be.

IDK if that made any sense, but it short: I liked this. A lot. It was so much more than a L/G piece to me.

[badboy_fangirl]

What's funny was I just wrote this because it was a plot bunny burning my brain and then clair_de_lune said she didn't think Lincoln would be able to kill Gretchen, and this whole other story formulated because of it, and now I'm a little bit obsessed with Linc/Gretchen.

But most definitely, this is just a character piece about Linc, that happens to use his feelings about Gretchen to illustrate where he was, and how far he's come. And that where he's come to is a very dark place. I feel like the other story that formed is showing his journey back from the darkness.

But thanks for leaving your thoughts; I'm glad you liked it.