A Traditional Puerto Rican Wedding

[domfangirlfic]

Title: A Traditional Puerto Rican Wedding
Author: domfangirl
Starring: Michael mostly, but there are appearances by Sara, Sucre, Maricruz, Lincoln, Sofia and LJ; and Sucre's family (all of whom I invented).
Category: One-shot
Rating: PG-13
Summary: When all else fails, throw the wedding yourself.
Author's Notes: chanchito_z asked, "How about something fluffy?

Comments

[lady_iz]

In my mind Sucre's son is named Miguel (after Michael of course), so I LOVE that you named him that.

This is one of those weddings you would love to attend. I can imagine everyone in informal dress, pretty colours, no jackets, not ties.

Thanks for the story. :)

[badboy_fangirl]

Thanks for commenting.

Yes, it just seems natural that Sucre would be sentimental in the naming of his son.

[bnleah]

Beautiful fic Candy! I loved Linc's rationalization for marrying Sofia even though he isn't in love with her. It made me wanna cry for poor Vee though. I liked how Michael got a little possessive over Sucre when he remembered that Linc & Sucre bonded while trying to break him out of Sona. (Sidenote: I hope we get some Linc+Mike+Nando BFF scenes in S4) It was nice to see that Sara reminded Michael that Lincoln is a grown man and doesn't always need to be saved by him.

You had a great mix of the serious and romantic with a bit of humor thrown in as well...

“I’d smack your ass,” Lincoln growled lowly. “But Father Torres is watching me like a hawk.”

Bwah! You write the best rude Linc lines.

Less than 5 weeks now! *yay*

[badboy_fangirl]

It made me wanna cry for poor Vee though.
It just made me cry for poor Linc. :-(

It was nice to see that Sara reminded Michael that Lincoln is a grown man and doesn't always need to be saved by him.
Yes, some rationality is nice! :-)

You had a great mix of the serious and romantic with a bit of humor thrown in as well...
It was such an odd fic when it started, I'm glad it all came together and had all those elements for you!

Thanks for commenting!

[badboy_fangirl]

What a nice review! Thank you.

I think I wrote the whole fic just so I could write that conversation between Linc and Mike. The rest of it was superfluous, but still fun to write. I'm hoping for a happier, more light-hearted atmosphere this season as well.

But I would like them to have a moment of silence for Veronica.

[badboy_fangirl]

My next plot bunny involves Dom and SWC at Comic Con. You might not know it, but I'm a firm Linc lover, and don't write Michael that much really. This was a fluke piece in reality.

Then I have to get to work finishing some WIPs I've had in the works for months (one is Michael related, but it's about him with Veronica). I actually hope I don't get any new plot bunnies, because I need to finish up that other stuff!

[eight8toes]

I loved it!! :D

I loved that Michael got to talk about his feeling about the wedding to Linc. And I loved that Sara could cut through Michael's trail of thoughts. She's amazing like that, I am sure.

Sucre... always so wonderful!

I loved the feeling of tenderness in this fic, the best.

[badboy_fangirl]

Thanks, Daphnee. It was very tender, everything about it, the way all the characters interacted. It made me love them all more, that's for sure! (I hope you feel better soon!)

[anonymous]

Aw this was too cute, perfect mix between seriousness and humor. Also love the little bit about Sara just usually turning around if Michael can't sleep, somehow it spoke volumes of thier relationship. And I always love Michael and Linc, and your vision on them is always very much like mine. You should write this more! The words that you have them say I can hear them say on the show easily. Good character depictions! No go write another one!

[badboy_fangirl]

Thank you. I've actually written a lot of Michael-Lincoln interaction, so this is by no means my first. There's tons more to read if you're looking for it. *g*

I'm always working on something, but lately RPF has overtaken my brain...